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== Use of [[Breitbart.com]] to defend ''[[America: Imagine the World Without Her]]'' == |
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{{hat|The purpose of noticeboards is to bring issues to the attention of univolved editors. This has already served its purpose as those editors are now commenting on and participating on the article's talk page. No uninvolved editor has commented on this discussion here in some time. It has degenerated to the point where only two people have been arguing back and forth between themselves for a week, so it is time for them to take it to the article talk page or their personal talk pages. [[User:Gamaliel|<font color="DarkGreen">Gamaliel</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Gamaliel|<font color="DarkGreen">talk</font>]])</small> 19:34, 6 August 2014 (UTC)}} |
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{{Stuck|1=In the past week the last <s>24</s> <s>25</s> <s>±30</s> ±'''35''' posts have been between two editors, with one side comment. All others, it seems, cannot find a [[Henry_V_(play)#Synopsis|breach]] in the [[WP:Wall of text]] with an insight which might resolve this. I suggest shutting this down and let the parties cool off before they then try another dispute resolution forum. – [[User:Srich32977|S. Rich]] ([[User talk:Srich32977|talk]]) 02:06, 4 August 2014 (UTC) 18:46, 4 August 2014 (UTC)23:22, 5 August 2014 (UTC) 17:06, 6 August 2014 (UTC)}} |
{{Stuck|1=In the past week the last <s>24</s> <s>25</s> <s>±30</s> ±'''35''' posts have been between two editors, with one side comment. All others, it seems, cannot find a [[Henry_V_(play)#Synopsis|breach]] in the [[WP:Wall of text]] with an insight which might resolve this. I suggest shutting this down and let the parties cool off before they then try another dispute resolution forum. – [[User:Srich32977|S. Rich]] ([[User talk:Srich32977|talk]]) 02:06, 4 August 2014 (UTC) 18:46, 4 August 2014 (UTC)23:22, 5 August 2014 (UTC) 17:06, 6 August 2014 (UTC)}} |
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::Actually the discussion has been "cool" enough in the last few rounds of exchange, and has made progress on various fronts, including scooby finally acknowledging that Ben Shapiro is a "notable" person. I doubt the discussion will continue too much longer. [[User:VictorD7|VictorD7]] ([[User talk:VictorD7|talk]]) 18:00, 4 August 2014 (UTC) |
::Actually the discussion has been "cool" enough in the last few rounds of exchange, and has made progress on various fronts, including scooby finally acknowledging that Ben Shapiro is a "notable" person. I doubt the discussion will continue too much longer. [[User:VictorD7|VictorD7]] ([[User talk:VictorD7|talk]]) 18:00, 4 August 2014 (UTC) |
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:::::::::::::::::::Your first two sentences (along with some of your later ones) repeat your circular argument, since you've been trying to use Breitbart's opinionated nature to claim that it's a "questionable source". And you clearly are trying to prohibit conservative sources, since you claimed that holding a conservative ideology represents a "conflict of interest" per QS (which is an absurd and essentially self annihilating contention). Nothing you've said about COI comes remotely close to showing that it applies to Breitbart at all, or to anything other than the type of (rare) "personal" "financial" examples the definition provides. Alexa doesn't base its ''categorization'' on "popularity". There are many popular opinion sites it doesn't list in its "News" rankings. Alexa's classification of Breitbart as a "news" site is strong evidence that we should at least be open to the possibility too. Your contention that Breitbart sometimes criticizing other news outfits somehow disqualifies it as a reliable source is absurd, as all news outfits do that, including the MSN piece you linked to earlier attacking Breitbart. I'm not sure what "NBC" piece you're referring to. Your link was to an MSN article. I posted the Shapiro response to show the other side (I tend to be fair minded and neutral like that). And, as I said, prominent media outfits routinely report "rumors" from anonymous sources. We can't logically hold that one example against Breitbart if we don't also hold it against the NY Times, Washington Post, ABC, etc.. [[User:VictorD7|VictorD7]] ([[User talk:VictorD7|talk]]) 19:24, 6 August 2014 (UTC) |
:::::::::::::::::::Your first two sentences (along with some of your later ones) repeat your circular argument, since you've been trying to use Breitbart's opinionated nature to claim that it's a "questionable source". And you clearly are trying to prohibit conservative sources, since you claimed that holding a conservative ideology represents a "conflict of interest" per QS (which is an absurd and essentially self annihilating contention). Nothing you've said about COI comes remotely close to showing that it applies to Breitbart at all, or to anything other than the type of (rare) "personal" "financial" examples the definition provides. Alexa doesn't base its ''categorization'' on "popularity". There are many popular opinion sites it doesn't list in its "News" rankings. Alexa's classification of Breitbart as a "news" site is strong evidence that we should at least be open to the possibility too. Your contention that Breitbart sometimes criticizing other news outfits somehow disqualifies it as a reliable source is absurd, as all news outfits do that, including the MSN piece you linked to earlier attacking Breitbart. I'm not sure what "NBC" piece you're referring to. Your link was to an MSN article. I posted the Shapiro response to show the other side (I tend to be fair minded and neutral like that). And, as I said, prominent media outfits routinely report "rumors" from anonymous sources. We can't logically hold that one example against Breitbart if we don't also hold it against the NY Times, Washington Post, ABC, etc.. [[User:VictorD7|VictorD7]] ([[User talk:VictorD7|talk]]) 19:24, 6 August 2014 (UTC) |
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Ernesto Kreplak
This is a short and simple case. Ernesto Kreplak is a man from Argentina, involved in two political scandals, and the article says so. But some users (User:Tiopappo and some IPs) try several times to remove this information from the article, and leave just a whitewashed version that merely mentions some small pet projects he has. Note that the content being removed is the only content that cites references which are not involved with Kreplak; in fact they are the only references with a proper format (the other content may be found at the external links). As for the references I used, I consider that Clarín and La Nación are reliable: Clarín is a member of the Global Editors Network, and La Nación is Argentina's newspaper of record. I tried to discuss it at Talk:Ernesto Kreplak#Campagnoli, but to no avail: the request to discuss the problem has been ignored, and the removals of content continued. Cambalachero (talk) 03:33, 17 July 2014 (UTC)
- I have notified all the involved users about this thread, both those who removed the portion of the article and those who restored it or discussed about it. I hope that I did the correct thing. Cambalachero (talk) 03:43, 17 July 2014 (UTC)
- All I made was a grammar and usage edit, so I guess this isn't something I have to worry too much about? I don't think I have anything to offer, so I'm moving along. Baconfry (talk) 05:10, 17 July 2014 (UTC)
- Per [1] and [2]. User 1. Removed the {{reflist}} template, which effectively breaks the page's footnotes, and 2. Removed sourced content without any explanation, added his/her signature to the article, and removed a maintenance tag when (I'm guessing) it still implies. Oh, and 3. Mislabelling edits as vandalism. Since it's one of many traits in vandalistic edits, I decided to revert. Scrutiny for my actions? --k6ka (talk | contribs) 13:07, 17 July 2014 (UTC)
- Your actions seem fine to me. I have left a conflict of interest query on Tiopappo's page. If they don't answer (as they seem altogether rather unwilling to engage in dialogue), I suppose I'll have to step it up a bit. Bishonen | talk 22:47, 20 July 2014 (UTC).
- There are several problems with the article, but NPOV does not seem to apply. Basically, the article is about a minor official in the government, who has some involvement in different projects. Because these are Spanish language sources, it is difficult to determine their reliability or how they pertain to the topic. I have remove some non-sourced BLP info and tagged the article for refimprove & notability. I do not think there is anything here, on the NPOVN, to do. – S. Rich (talk) 21:19, 27 July 2014 (UTC)
- Your actions seem fine to me. I have left a conflict of interest query on Tiopappo's page. If they don't answer (as they seem altogether rather unwilling to engage in dialogue), I suppose I'll have to step it up a bit. Bishonen | talk 22:47, 20 July 2014 (UTC).
- Per [1] and [2]. User 1. Removed the {{reflist}} template, which effectively breaks the page's footnotes, and 2. Removed sourced content without any explanation, added his/her signature to the article, and removed a maintenance tag when (I'm guessing) it still implies. Oh, and 3. Mislabelling edits as vandalism. Since it's one of many traits in vandalistic edits, I decided to revert. Scrutiny for my actions? --k6ka (talk | contribs) 13:07, 17 July 2014 (UTC)
I have serious questions which I have raised on the talk page regarding whether the article adheres to WP:WTW and also about the broader neutrality of the article and also some expressed concerns regarding conduct matters. Additional input there would be very welcome. John Carter (talk) 22:52, 21 July 2014 (UTC)
- Can you provide a link to the discussion thread about "Words to watch" - what words are in violation of it? Scientists have rejected ID as a scientific theory because it cannot be empirically tested. As an analogy, your house may be haunted with ghosts causing creaking signs at night. But all scientists can do is attempt to rule out various natural causes. TFD (talk) 23:21, 21 July 2014 (UTC)
- John may be referring to Talk:Intelligent design#Thesis and theories and bias which discusses a point he's also raised at Wikipedia:Arbitration/Requests/Clarification and Amendment#Clarification request: Pseudoscience. He seems to think that the WP:WTW guideline trumps WP:PSTS policy, and for that matter also wants to disregard WP:PSTS policy in order to WP:GEVAL to pseudoscience. . . dave souza, talk 23:29, 21 July 2014 (UTC)
- (e-c) The second paragraph of the WP:LABEL section of WP:WTW begins, "The prefix pseudo‑ indicates that something is false or spurious, which may be debatable." That raises questions regarding the use of that rather loaded word, and I admit to having not seen that myself until a recent ARCA on chiropractic, prior to which I saw nothing wrong with the word myself. And, FWIW, this also relates to an existing request regarding the use of that word there at WP:ARCA. No one BTW is arguing ID theories aren't woo, but there is a question as to whether the core principle is. And my thanks to Dave for both an apparent prejudicial rush to judgment and attempt at mischaraterization of the concerns of others. John Carter (talk) 23:46, 21 July 2014 (UTC)
- LABEL of course is a guideline not a policy and significantly it does not mention "pseudo-science." So while editors are not required to follow it, they should have a good reason not to. To me, saying ID is pseudo-science is not helpful, because it assumes readers know what pseudo-science is. So MOS:JARGON may be a consideration. It might be better to say that "scientists consider it pseudo-science because...." In that way we could explain what pseudo-science means and why it is considered pseudo-science. TFD (talk) 02:08, 22 July 2014 (UTC)
- No need to explain what pseudoscience is in the article... Readers can find out what pseudoscience is by reading our article on Pseudoscience... that's what internal links are for. Blueboar (talk) 12:55, 22 July 2014 (UTC)
- LABEL of course is a guideline not a policy and significantly it does not mention "pseudo-science." So while editors are not required to follow it, they should have a good reason not to. To me, saying ID is pseudo-science is not helpful, because it assumes readers know what pseudo-science is. So MOS:JARGON may be a consideration. It might be better to say that "scientists consider it pseudo-science because...." In that way we could explain what pseudo-science means and why it is considered pseudo-science. TFD (talk) 02:08, 22 July 2014 (UTC)
- (e-c) The second paragraph of the WP:LABEL section of WP:WTW begins, "The prefix pseudo‑ indicates that something is false or spurious, which may be debatable." That raises questions regarding the use of that rather loaded word, and I admit to having not seen that myself until a recent ARCA on chiropractic, prior to which I saw nothing wrong with the word myself. And, FWIW, this also relates to an existing request regarding the use of that word there at WP:ARCA. No one BTW is arguing ID theories aren't woo, but there is a question as to whether the core principle is. And my thanks to Dave for both an apparent prejudicial rush to judgment and attempt at mischaraterization of the concerns of others. John Carter (talk) 23:46, 21 July 2014 (UTC)
- John may be referring to Talk:Intelligent design#Thesis and theories and bias which discusses a point he's also raised at Wikipedia:Arbitration/Requests/Clarification and Amendment#Clarification request: Pseudoscience. He seems to think that the WP:WTW guideline trumps WP:PSTS policy, and for that matter also wants to disregard WP:PSTS policy in order to WP:GEVAL to pseudoscience. . . dave souza, talk 23:29, 21 July 2014 (UTC)
- Blueboar Nope, the issue is cites do not support using the label. Creationism has prominent use, but pseudoscience does not and WP:LABEL says "Use these in articles only when they are in wide use externally" -- this word just popped in at 13-15 April 2014 by apparently just editors wordsmithing not from it's use outside or some presented logic; see | old talk Markbassett (talk) 05:10, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
- I am not sure it is appropriate for the OP to be raising essentially the same issue in multiple places such as the ID talk page, an Admin's talk page (of more concern when followed up with this), at NPOVN, plus his comments with these two edits at ARCA. It smacks of forum shopping to me. - Nick Thorne talk 09:54, 22 July 2014 (UTC)
- "General points on linking style" says, "Do not unnecessarily make a reader chase links: if a highly technical term can be simply explained with very few words, do so. Also use a link, but do not make a reader be forced to use that link to understand the sentence.... Don't assume that readers will be able to access a link at all, as, for example, they might have printed an article and be reading the hard copy on paper." The link is there in case a reader wants to know more about a term. TFD (talk) 18:42, 22 July 2014 (UTC)
- If this comment was directed at me, in each link in my previous post I provided a brief description of each link within the context of the sentence sufficient to understand what was being said. If you want to see the details then follow the link, but the point being made was that this editor has raised the same issue in multiple places. Adding further detail from each link would cloud that substantive issue. - Nick Thorne talk 22:15, 22 July 2014 (UTC)
- "General points on linking style" says, "Do not unnecessarily make a reader chase links: if a highly technical term can be simply explained with very few words, do so. Also use a link, but do not make a reader be forced to use that link to understand the sentence.... Don't assume that readers will be able to access a link at all, as, for example, they might have printed an article and be reading the hard copy on paper." The link is there in case a reader wants to know more about a term. TFD (talk) 18:42, 22 July 2014 (UTC)
- I am not sure it is appropriate for the OP to be raising essentially the same issue in multiple places such as the ID talk page, an Admin's talk page (of more concern when followed up with this), at NPOVN, plus his comments with these two edits at ARCA. It smacks of forum shopping to me. - Nick Thorne talk 09:54, 22 July 2014 (UTC)
Use of Breitbart.com to defend America: Imagine the World Without Her
The purpose of noticeboards is to bring issues to the attention of univolved editors. This has already served its purpose as those editors are now commenting on and participating on the article's talk page. No uninvolved editor has commented on this discussion here in some time. It has degenerated to the point where only two people have been arguing back and forth between themselves for a week, so it is time for them to take it to the article talk page or their personal talk pages. Gamaliel (talk) 19:34, 6 August 2014 (UTC) |
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The movie, America: Imagine the World Without Her received over wheeling negative reviews by film critics. However, the article has a long quote from Breitbart.com that defends the movie. I think the source is a fringe source and the long quote is WP:UNDUE. Other editors disagree. I would ask for some input into this issue. Thanks in advance. The talk page discussion can be found here. Casprings (talk) 02:33, 22 July 2014 (UTC)
I'd like to note a couple of things. The specific reference to breitbart.com is regarding a quote from the producer. The "reception" section is suppose to inform readers about how the film was critically and publicly received and I don't see how Molen's criticism of a review is relevant to the purpose of a section. That quote and information seems more appropriately placed on a page about Molen. The next thing I'd like to note is the use of cinemascore. I don't have a problem with the use of cinemascore, but it should not be given equal weight to what critics say and should be identified and separated as viewer polling. The way the information is presented now, it appears the cinemascore is provided to contradict with the critic's score and that is an example of undue weight. That would be like using the opinions of civilians to contradict historians in an article about the civil war. I think the cinemascore information should be moved to its own paragraph and specifically identified as a survey of moviegoers and other viewer based reviews should also be referenced. Scoobydunk (talk) 16:53, 22 July 2014 (UTC)
Did you read the guideline quotes I posted showing that we aren't restricted to only presenting professional film critics' opinions? The guidelines specifically endorse including reception from audiences and notable non film critics. This particular article section isn't even titled "Critical reception", but just "Reception". So the majority of pro critics thinking something doesn't mean other views should be excluded. You also appear confused on a few points. The hypothetical labels in Wiki's voice being discussed in this tangent aren't currently in the article, so it would be hard to remove them. And, again, if sources use the label then it's not WP:OR to apply it. It may or may not be appropriate for other reasons, but it's not original research as defined by the policy. Finally, it seems to me that purging half the debate and only allowing one side of the political divide's voice into an article about an explicitly political film, while scrubbing any mention of said voice's political affiliation, is the very definition of POV. Neutrality demands both sides be presented if there's more than one significant view, as there clearly is. We can simply include coverage of both sides without the Wiki voice labels you object to. Whether or not to add them is a slightly different issue. VictorD7 (talk) 21:32, 22 July 2014 (UTC)
Hogwash on all counts. Ben Shapiro is "notable" by definition because he has a Wikipedia article about him. None of the negative film reviewers currently quoted in the article have such articles, and therefore aren't notable by definition. That you start off by making such a grossly, factually inaccurate claim invalidates your whole position. Shapiro represents at least half the American political spectrum. In fact Gallup polling shows that conservatives outnumber liberals by about two to one, which is why Democrats run more rhetorically away from their base in general elections than Republicans do (the latter are certainly more likely to call themselves "conservative" than the former are "liberal"), even often echoing (sincerely or not) the type of patriotic themes espoused by people like D'Souza and Shapiro. Regardless, you can't dismiss half the political spectrum as unfit for mention. That's insane and unacceptable POV on your part. As for topical scope, my Talk Page section notes that it's routine for Wikipedia articles to cover the noteworthy or controversial aspects of the reception itself, and I list several specific high profile examples. Certainly you've presented nothing in guidelines or policy to prohibit such commentary. The fact that Shapiro's views clearly represent the vast majority of those who have watched the film further refutes your argument. VictorD7 (talk) 16:15, 31 July 2014 (UTC)
Resetting the discussionI have isolated the critics responses into their own section in accordance with MOS:FILM#Critical response. It now has the Rotten Tomatoes & Metacritic data, plus one review from Ebert. The non-movie-critic responses are in a following section. IMO this "new" section will allow for discussion of the film from the political blogger/commentator points of view and avoid the unnecessarily disruptive debate as to whether Hollywood is left, far left or whatever. So, the question can get back to the original theme – to what extent should Breitbart.com and other commentators be placed in the article? – S. Rich (talk) 04:03, 23 July 2014 (UTC) Back to Breitbart.com as a reliable news sourceI strongly object to calling Breitbart.com a 'Conservative blog'. A 'blog' it is not. It has reporters, editors, and source of revenue. "Breitbart.com is a conservative news and opinion website founded in 2007 by Andrew Breitbart,"' says Wikipedia editors in Breitbart.com which is a better description. -- Charles Edwin Shipp (talk) 04:35, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
But Shapiro is part of those "Other responses", so the section is as much about his opinion and the millions of conservatives his views represent as the Basic Instinct "Controversy" section (which isn't just about the gay protests, but various other topics too) is about opinions from gay activists and pundits like Camille Paglia. Again, the Paglia quote is sourced by her own book. In that case and Shapiro's such opinionated sources are fine as long as they're properly attributed, because policy considers people reliable for their own views, and a quote from someone is material about that someone (what he or she said) from a sourcing/policy standpoint, regardless of what the quote itself is about. As for Breitbart, while I disagree on the relevance of this, it's a news/opinion site classified as "news" by Alexa (currently ranked the #38 news site in the world), and most news sites have plenty of opinion/analysis segments anyway. Certainly some of the sources cited in the above Basic Instinct examples are opinionated, including the Paglia book. The section is explicitly about personal opinions, as is the America section in question. I've also seen no evidence that either Shapiro or Breitbart are "extremist" (certainly no more so than the gay activists and others quoted on the Basic Instinct page, or for that matter the extremely left wing reviewers quoted on the America page), and the only complaint about fact checking a poster presented here comes from the leftist opinion site Slate. That said, even if Breitbart was considered "questionable" for being opinionated (like Paglia's writing?), at most that would just mean that it would be a less than desirable source for facts about others, not material about itself like a quote of its own author's views. VictorD7 (talk) 17:27, 2 August 2014 (UTC)
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Sarason/Nelsondenis248 and Fisher Klingenstein Films/FilmRise
About eight months ago, while randomly looking up movies, I stumbled upon the article for Fisher Klingenstein Films (henceforth FKF). As you can see, the page reads like a news release. At the time, there had been much discussion on the talk page about how bad it was, with the creating editor, Nelsondenis248 (talk · contribs · deleted contribs · logs · filter log · block user · block log), repeatedly insisting on discussion, consensus, etc.
Being a brand-new editor, I thought I'd stretch my muscles by fixing it up. I spent an hour or two working on a trimmed-down version that removed the gobs and gobs of praise that made the page read so biased. As I noted on the talk page, I left one section relatively intact to demonstrate how poorly it was constructed, and suggested that the movie be split into its own page.
Sarason (talk · contribs · deleted contribs · logs · filter log · block user · block log) proceeded to 'restore' the old version of the article and scolded me on the talk page. I responded by placing a 'news release' tag on the article page and hoping someone else would come along and complete what I had failed. At the time, I was unaware of the existence of noticeboards.
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As I was randomly wiki-stalking his contributions page today, I noticed that he'd spent the past week working hard on the page for FilmRise, which he created back in March (two months after the above almost-edit-war). It is the exact same article as the FKF article, but with the name of the company changed and some more recent (and self-promoting) paragraphs added. There's been no attempt to redirect the original page or fix the original problems; the new page still reads like a news release.
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Whether you think I'm a moron or actually onto something, thank you so much for reading this, my first NPOV noticeboard post. I'm not sure how to notify Sarason that I've made this post; if there's a relevant template I can place on his usertalk page, please let me know. FekketCantenel (talk) 00:30, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
After posting and returning to the main noticeboard, I saw the NPOVN-notice instructions. I will post that on his user talk page now. FekketCantenel (talk) 00:34, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
- FekketCantenel, first things first: make sure you are well aware of WP:OUTING. In fact, let me call up an admin or two to see if you've gone too far already: John, Dennis Brown, Bbb23, TParis. Drmies (talk) 01:00, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
- A couple of things, saying "Nelsondenis248/Sarason knows Alan Klingenstein" isn't quite outing but I suggest reading the link Drmies gave you so you don't take it too far. This is a claim of COI, so WP:COIN seems more appropriate than this board. As far as changing his name, his old name redirects to the new, so there is no problem there. There does seem to be at least a little meat on this bone, as FilmRise and Fisher Klingenstein Films are WAY too similar for both to exist, but I don't have time to fix that issue. Dennis Brown | 2¢ | WER 01:23, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
- I'm not real good at this stuff, so Dennis may be right, but my reading of it is that it should be suppressed. I've taken the necessary steps to see if I'm right. If nothing else, I'll learn something.--Bbb23 (talk) 01:27, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
- I haven't posted anything, before or after this recent edit, that couldn't be found by Googling the user's original username. However, I've removed the link to his online resume and made other revisions indicating only that certain information can be found if you Google his name. If I've missed anything objectionable, please let me know.
- I looked around a bit before settling on posting on the NPOV forum, and somehow missed the existence of COIN. If you folks concur that I should repost this there (with any necessary edits to remove too-personal information), I will. FekketCantenel (talk)
- I think you should hold off doing anything until all this is resolved and you can be properly advised as to what is acceptable and what is not.--Bbb23 (talk) 01:45, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
- (edit conflict) Digging around a bit more, I see how that might be a problem, but will leave it to OS to decide, that is their expertise. Dennis Brown | 2¢ | WER 01:33, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
- For what it's worth, I wasn't aware of WP:OUTING and wouldn't have thought posting Google-able information would count, anyway. I'll accept whatever punishment is deemed appropriate for this breach, but also hope the issues I raised can be addressed. FekketCantenel (talk) 01:41, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
- Our concern isn't "punishing" you, it is about privacy. Dennis Brown | 2¢ | WER 01:55, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
- Dennis, I left some advice on Fekket's talk page. You or Drmies should feel free to add to it. Thanks.--Bbb23 (talk) 02:01, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
- Our concern isn't "punishing" you, it is about privacy. Dennis Brown | 2¢ | WER 01:55, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
- OK. Outing removed/redacted. Fekket, not everything that's Googled is valid for posting here.
Next item. It's clear that there's a ton of non-neutral editing was going on in those articles. I have redirected Fisher Klingenstein Films to FilmRise, without worrying about the editing history: they were basically the same articles, and the edits are preserved in the history of FKF (tell you what--and I hope that John, Dennis Brown, Bbb23, TParis don't mind looking over my shoulder--I'm going to protect that redirect). I've seriously trimmed Alan Klingenstein and Nelson Antonio Denis, and did the same for FilmRise. I pinged you guys again: if you agree with the basic gist of those edits, state it here for the record, so that Fekket and others have something to fall back on later, should disruption erupt. Fekket, so far so good? I'm not going to address the identity and the other links--by editing those articles I think we achieve the result we want as well. Oh, I left an only warning on the talk page of Sarason. Thanks, Drmies (talk) 02:07, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
- Okay, got to it today. For the record, I agree with the trimming, which was indeed serious. From what I can tell, it removed based on puffery and WP:UNDUE. Made a few copy edits to all three articles. Thanks, Drmies.--Bbb23 (talk) 05:42, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
- I'm really happy with all of that! The articles look much better now, and good idea about protecting the redirect. I second the request for approval of your edits, in case this comes up again. There's also always the possibility of bringing it before COIN; I had a question about that on my usertalk page if anyone would like to look. No matter what, I plan to run future reports of this nature past an experienced admin before posting it publicly, until I gain an understanding of WP policy.
- Thanks so much, everyone; this has been very educational for me. FekketCantenel (talk) 02:16, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
- I've reviewed FilmRise and Nelson Antonio Denis articles and I endorse the trimming. Protection may have been a bit proactive but it's within discretion and I'm not going to second judge those who got there first without good cause. @FekketCantenel: I think you'll fit in nicely on the project, welcome aboard.--v/r - TP 06:26, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
- The trimming and redirect are fine. We the information, just not all the redundancy and fluff. And I agree with TParis here on the other points, proactive and welcome and all that ;) Dennis Brown | 2¢ | WER 12:08, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
- I agree with the foregoing and also suggest raising at WP:COIN. Coretheapple (talk) 21:25, 26 July 2014 (UTC)
History of Lego
A small and apparently deadlocked disagreement at the Talk:History of Lego#Uncritical timeline - in the article's brief summary of the recent Lego Movie, is it enough to quote an LA Times review round-up describing the film as "a critical and commercial success" as fact, or is that an opinion which should be balanced by quoting a New York Times reviewer who used the phrase "90-minute infomercial"? A sample diff of the disputed line is here. --McGeddon (talk) 13:15, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
- A movie review is opinion and not fact. Differing opinions can be mentioned, but it is also important not to give outliers UNDUE WEIGHT. If every review except one says a movie is wonderful... we should not give that one dissenting review undue weight by highlighting it. Blueboar (talk) 00:31, 24 July 2014 (UTC)
- Differing opinions should be mentioned I agree. Undue weight right now is given to the commercial side, see flags for ad. Undue weight depends on the context. The context is an article that consisted of material mostly from primary sources (until I started editing). McGeddon is using your opinion as a judgement to oust this one particular reference. He does not tell you that I compromised to keep both references and mentioning the LA times ref first. Blueboar, if you havent already done so, I encourage you to read the page, and assess the context. The NYT review of the movie actually resonates with what has been going on at Lego over the past 10 years, as I have carved out on the page and it is not giving undue weight.--Wuerzele (talk) 07:20, 27 July 2014 (UTC)
Stumbled upon this rather suspect article today. The only source that seems reliable (Marcombe's "Leper Knights") only covers the Order up to its dissolution in England in the 1500. A lot of the other sources appear to be first party works by the purported modern descendants of the Order, and/or self published.
Some quick research suggests that there was a fairly obscure Order of Saint Lazarus, which became defunct after the French Revolution. There are also a number of modern "recreations", some of which purport to continuations of the original order. One of the key figures involved appears to have been Robert Gayre, which does not inspire a great deal of confidence. At a bare minimum, I'm inclined to wipe everything post 18th century as unsourced and just mention that a number of modern organizations are named after the original order. --RaiderAspect (talk) 10:53, 25 July 2014 (UTC)
- Not really a good topic for this noticeboard, which is for disputes and has a backlog. (Also, there is no present discussion on the article talk page.) Suggest you WP:BB and make revisions to the article. Or, perhaps, it could benefit from a {{refimprove}} tag. – S. Rich (talk) 20:12, 27 July 2014 (UTC)
Featured Anarcho-capitalism article is being held captive to left-anarchist editors.
Anarcho-capitalist editors are underrepresented among so-called "anarchist" editors, and the latter (more properly "left-anarchists") have been holding the page captive for several months to inclusion of their POV about anarchism "proper". This does not necessarily imply that anarcho-capitalists are a documentable heterodoxy (which would be irrelevant anyway, since anCaps have no desire to be counted among them), nor that there even exists an official definition of "anarchy" (which, even if it were the case, would not apply to an article that is not about anarchism "proper"). The early POV subtly writes off anarcho-capitalism as "illegitimate".
https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Anarcho-capitalism&diff=607632560&oldid=607397020
Currently there is a NPOV tag gracing the article (which as of now is, I believe, npov)
https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Anarcho-capitalism&diff=616525121&oldid=616514970
and edit protection expired today.
https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Anarcho-capitalism&diff=618531990&oldid=616619670
While I have made every effort to resolve the conflict by attempting to clarify the nature of the dispute - not only in the body, but already in the lede - they insist that their definition of "anarchism" is "correct", since various prominent left-anarchists claim the title, and that said POV be included in the lede. My hope is that objectivity ultimately takes precedence over majoritarianism.
While I believe that mention of the conflict among anarchists need not be included in the lede in order to satisfy npov requirements, the following compromise text addresses the issue of definition to the extent possible in a few lines without compromising neutrality:
Anarcho-capitalists distinguish themselves from minarchists, who advocate a small night-watchman state limited to the function of individual protection, and traditional anarchists, who typically reject private property and market processes, in favor of collective ownership arrangements. In contrast to left-anarchists, who believe that economic relationships tend to be hierarchical, anarcho-capitalists believe that hierarchies can only be flattened in a naturally competitive marketplace to the extent that states and state-sponsored monopolies are abolished. As a result, there is disagreement between anarcho-capitalists and left-anarchists over the nature of "anarchy".
JLMadrigal (talk) 13:47, 26 July 2014 (UTC)
- Our friend JLMadrigal has put so much spin on the dispute that the true problem is blurred. JLMadrigal uses the label "Featured article" to lend an air of high respectability to the current version of the article, which is however very, very different from the 2006 FAR version, the version which resulted after a lot of different viewpoints were applied to the article during the 2006 FAR discussion. After the 2006 discussion, the article was eventually taken in hand by ancap adherents who gave it a much more subjective and promotional tone. This discussion started by JLMadrigal should instead have the heading Featured article Anarcho-capitalism has been changed to a subjective in-universe style and is being vigorously defended by adherents of a minor viewpoint.
- To anyone who asks nicely I will say that I am a fan of big government—a strong central government—for reasons having to do with historically ugly social problems such as racism, sexism, and economic inequality. So to find myself characterized by JLMadrigal as a "left-anarchist editor" is entertaining if not ridiculous. This shows the degree of WP:BATTLEGROUND attitude which has been applied by ancap adherents to the dispute. During the dispute, one such editor was blocked for 36 hours for "personal attacks, incivility and battleground behaviour". None of the mainstream editors was blocked.
- Instead of being a battle between ancaps and leftist anarchists, the problem here is one of the article having lost its former objectivity, having lost touch with the mainstream literature. The dispute is between ancap adherents and everybody else in the world, that is, the general mainstream viewpoint. The current dispute is about beginning to restore a mainstream viewpoint, and it is just a start. If ancap adherents are resisting this strongly then we have a real neutrality problem. Binksternet (talk) 17:22, 26 July 2014 (UTC)
- After briefly skimming the talk page for the article, it will become immediately apparent that the disputed text is just as I described it: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Anarcho-capitalism JLMadrigal (talk) 00:49, 27 July 2014 (UTC)
- Furthermore, the article is just as worthy of the honor it has received - if not more so today - and continues to evolve. It is exemplary of encyclopedic text. JLMadrigal (talk) 11:13, 27 July 2014 (UTC)
- I suspect the phrasing of this thread as opened should clear up any confusion as to where the neutrality problems lie here. As noted, "neutrality" does not consist in having a page written to the perspective of adherents of the philosophy it describes (nor of course does it consist in having it written to the views of opponents – which no one is asking for). Instead it consists in having third-party description and analysis in reliable and authoritative sources noted and reflected with due weight, which is all that was being asked for here, in respect of simply one or two sentences, relating to the fundamental definition and classification of the topic. JLMadrigal also conveniently forgets to note that there was an RfC about the disputed text, which closed in favour of including it. Since then, they and "User:Knight of BAAWA" have tried to reignite a tedious edit war and to remove or change that text. People seeking relief really ought to come with clean hands, as they say in the legal world. And, finally, no, the article is not FA worthy. With or without the disputed content, it is badly written, sprawling, confusing, full of badly sourced material etc. After all the absurd fuss over this one sentence, I'm loath to institute another formal process in the form of an official FA review, but I'd happily have an FA reviewer look at it, even informally, and assess whether it is "exemplary of encyclopedic text". Oh, and I'm not an anarchist either. N-HH talk/edits 10:11, 29 July 2014 (UTC)
I am an involved editor who disagrees with JLMadrigal's portrayal of the situation. It appears that there are a few editors on the Anarcho-capitalism page who believe the subject needs to be composed from an anarcho-capitalist POV: [4] [5] [6]
The Talk page is also filled with uncivil remarks toward dissenters: [7] [8] [9]
These same editors have marked content removals—the same content in dispute—as minor edits: [10] [11]
Contrary to JLMadrigal's claim that we "insist that [our] definition of 'anarchism' is 'correct'", it is JLMadrigal who wants additions to be couched in his POV: [12]
When it comes to verifiability, robust secondary sources on anarchism explain that anarcho-capitalism is a relatively recent, US phenomenon that opposes much of traditional anarchist theory (see Peter Marshall's Demanding the Impossible: A History of Anarchism and Colin Ward's Anarchism: A Very Short Introduction; Daniel Guérin's Anarchism: From Theory to Practice, written in 1970, doesn't even mention anarcho-capitalists). This dispute is not about sources or relevance; it's about anarcho-capitalists wanting a fluff piece in place of an academic encyclopaedia. — MisterDub (talk | contribs) 15:10, 29 July 2014 (UTC)
And now, we have those same editors reverting inclusion of the disputed material after a RfC was closed in its favor. No discussion, just reverting. [13] [14] [15] — MisterDub (talk | contribs) 13:22, 30 July 2014 (UTC)
Nor are the most comprehensive secondary sources on anarchism sufficient for Netoholic, who demands an extra guarantee that these sources aren't "cherry-picked". — MisterDub (talk | contribs) 15:23, 4 August 2014 (UTC)
- Exactly! We should not host a fluff piece as if it were Featured Article quality. Binksternet (talk) 16:37, 29 July 2014 (UTC)
- OK, back to the issue. Discussion of the debate among various anarchist strains IS included in the article. Not advancing it to the lede does not compromise neutrality. Further, a clear definition of the anarcho-capitalist philosophy is prerequisite to an understanding of the differences among the schools of thought in question. JLMadrigal (talk) 09:42, 30 July 2014 (UTC)
The headline of this section is basically correct. The fundamental problem with the (left-)Anarchists here is that they misunderstand, or are intentionally misrepresenting, the root word of "anarcho-capitalism" which is "anarchy" (a society which rejects rulers or governments), not "Anarchism" (the political movement). Anarcho-capitalists advocate anarchy, but do not claim to advocate for the Anarchist movement (which traditionally has been anti-capitalist). As far as I know, there is no AnCap literature that attempts to imply that AnCap is a sub-type of the Anarchist movement, so all this defensiveness from left-Anarchists is unwarranted... its pointless and misplaced to refute something which is not even being proposed. The issues here would clear up if, instead of trying to shoehorn even more anti-capitalist disagreement into an increasingly diluted and unclear article, we clarify the terminology and explain that the only thing AnCaps and Anarchists have in common is the desire for anarchy. Let this article stand on its own two feet and be a clear explanation of the philosophy, without putting tripwires of unfounded disagreement in every section which come off as Anarchists inserting "Nuh-uh!" every few lines. -- Netoholic @ 19:03, 30 July 2014 (UTC)
- To rectify Netoholic's incorrect statements: 1) the root of both anarcho-capitalism and anarchism is ἀναρχία (anarchia), meaning "without rulers" or "without leaders" and 2) the article states clearly that the founder of anarcho-capitalism believes his philosophy to be the "true anarchism" ("In other words, we believe that capitalism is the fullest expression of anarchism, and anarchism is the fullest expression of capitalism. Not only are they compatible, but you can't really have one without the other. True anarchism will be capitalism, and true capitalism will be anarchism." [source]). — MisterDub (talk | contribs) 20:08, 30 July 2014 (UTC)
- Indeed. Its adherents make the claim, and the page as written clearly asserts anarcho-capitalism to be a form of anarchism (ie the political theory/movement, if we're going to get into semantics). Did people miss the huge "Anarchism" template plonked in the lead? Or the first sentence which explicitly says "also referred to a free-market anarchism, market anarchism .." etc? The idea that the page can state all that while ignoring the significant dispute over that classification/description noted in third-party objective sources beggars belief. Also, did people miss the fact that at least two people commenting here, myself included, have explicitly said they are not anarchists? The very fact that this is persistently being cast, by the latter, as a dispute between left-anarchist and right-libertarian editors is part of the problem and says more about those who seem, for some reason, to think that that is what is going on here than it does about those who are in fact arguing for genuine neutrality and objectivity. N-HH talk/edits 10:31, 31 July 2014 (UTC)
- I guess I should state explicitly that I am a "left-anarchist" (not really a notable term, but whatever), but only added the article to my watchlist after witnessing the uncivil comments and battleground behavior from the three aforementioned editors (on 20 June 2014). — MisterDub (talk | contribs) 17:13, 31 July 2014 (UTC)
- Indeed. Its adherents make the claim, and the page as written clearly asserts anarcho-capitalism to be a form of anarchism (ie the political theory/movement, if we're going to get into semantics). Did people miss the huge "Anarchism" template plonked in the lead? Or the first sentence which explicitly says "also referred to a free-market anarchism, market anarchism .." etc? The idea that the page can state all that while ignoring the significant dispute over that classification/description noted in third-party objective sources beggars belief. Also, did people miss the fact that at least two people commenting here, myself included, have explicitly said they are not anarchists? The very fact that this is persistently being cast, by the latter, as a dispute between left-anarchist and right-libertarian editors is part of the problem and says more about those who seem, for some reason, to think that that is what is going on here than it does about those who are in fact arguing for genuine neutrality and objectivity. N-HH talk/edits 10:31, 31 July 2014 (UTC)
The article on far-left politics seems to be very biased compared to its inverse. I raised the issue on the talk page, but the involved editors seemed to have preconceived notions of what "real leftism" was and thus didn't include Stalinism and consequences such as religious persecution and Antisemitism. I welcome input on the matter. --monochrome_monitor 16:33, 27 July 2014 (UTC)
- No one questioned whether or not Stalin was a "real leftist", just whether or not his form of leftism was as far left as it was possible to go. And far right is not the reverse of far left. The term far right is used for lack of a better term to describe nazis, klansmen, etc., while the term far left depends on whatever the individual writer decides it means. But there are always more precise terms for left-wing ideologies, such as socialism, communism and anarchism, and the various subcategories, such as Stalinism, Trotskyism and Maoism, are clearly defined. TFD (talk) 19:25, 27 July 2014 (UTC)
- What I don't understand is why the far-left is up to interpretation but the far-right is not. --monochrome_monitor 20:55, 27 July 2014 (UTC) It just seems odd.
- They're just words. There is no actual middle between them, that's only implied, by making us think of our left and right hands. So no objective near or far, or constant balance, like there is on a globe. Believing in a "right" concept doesn't make you believe less in another "left". There's a dualism, but only of specific issues, not ideologies. InedibleHulk (talk) 03:27, August 2, 2014 (UTC)
- What I don't understand is why the far-left is up to interpretation but the far-right is not. --monochrome_monitor 20:55, 27 July 2014 (UTC) It just seems odd.
- Search on Google books for "far right" and "far left". "Far right" shows a body of academic literature with a coherent description of the far right. "Far left" shows mostly non-academic books many of them not rs at all - the first page of hits for example includes a book published by World Net Daily and a book by Billy James Hargis, and there is no consistency in how the expression is used. TFD (talk) 23:54, 27 July 2014 (UTC)
Tagging
When an editor places a tag questioning the neutrality of an article, can the tag be removed if the editor does not engage in discussion on the reason for the tag or withdraws from the discussion for several weeks? Rev107 (talk) 01:18, 30 July 2014 (UTC)
- The policy Wikipedia:NPOV dispute is detailed here. On the tag itself it clearly states "don't removed until dispute is resolved" So, no. I guess it is a matter of protocol that all editors should follow for the good of the project. Some editors obviously have no regard to policy nor respect for other editors.Mrm7171 (talk) 06:42, 30 July 2014 (UTC)
- That's not correct, and Mrm7121 got a 6 month block for edit warring. Yes, if the editor doesn't give reasons for the tag it can be removed. If the discussion is abandoned it can also be removed - it can always be restored if the discussion is renewed. Abandoning a discussion can be one form of resolution, otherwise a tag might have to stay on forever. In addition, I don't see that a single editor who simply won't change their mind can hold an article for ransom. Dougweller (talk) 09:47, 6 August 2014 (UTC)
Occupational Health Psychology article grossly biased
The occupational health psychology article is grossly biased in mine and other independent editor's opinion. I have tried discussing issues on the talk page, to no avail.
4 months ago, a number of independent editors had all agreed that the article needed to be completely re-written. Nothing was ever done. I have tried to detail my concerns as per Wikipedia policy, again, to no avail. Some of the main reasons why I believe it to be biased and written from a POV perspective are these: It is a non-neutral article, that does not fairly represent the balance of perspectives of high-quality, reliable secondary sources. No other editors can add reliably sourced material, without it being blocked by iss246 & colleague psyc12. It has been written solely from a USA perspective, from a USA OHP Society perspective only, without providing a worldwide view on the topic. It does not present the controversies surrounding OHP. Controversies of origin and overlap. Presents OHP as a distinct field within psychology. It does not give due weight to other reliable secondary sources. Points of view are not recognized internationally within the psychology community. I tried adding alternate titles, as is commonly found in other Wikipedia, (also known as occupational health: psychology and management 'United Kingdom' and occupational health, safety and well being psychology 'Australia'). But iss246 quicly censored these reliably sourced, neutral titles also. Posting here is a last resort. This extremely controversial coatrack article desperately needs to be entirely re-written, or even deleted?Mrm7171 (talk) 01:44, 30 July 2014 (UTC)
- This "occupational health psychology (OHP)" seems to be about the National Institute for Occupational Safety and Health type in particular. If that's the case, it should be US-centric, because that's a US federal agency. If the article is meant to have a broader scope, the definition in the lead shouldn't be sourced to the American one. I've explicitly mentioned NIOSH in the lead now, to give context. That doesn't mean I think it should be that way, but if it is, it should be clear. InedibleHulk (talk) 02:07, July 30, 2014 (UTC)
- I totally agree and the change is fine with me. The whole article is written from a USA perspective. I just added the UK and Australian titles often used. Hope this brings some solution at least to the different titles used worldwide. However the US definition remains a major concern if the article does not clearly specify it is a US-centric article only.Mrm7171 (talk) 02:13, 30 July 2014 (UTC)
- In a sense, a lot of the content isn't particular to one state or the other. It's more about very specific groups of humans that other specific people observe and report upon, hoping to gain insight into general human behaviour. If other governments have similar concepts, I'd think they'd be deserving of their own articles, but it's not like Australians or Cameroonians can't learn something here.
- I totally agree and the change is fine with me. The whole article is written from a USA perspective. I just added the UK and Australian titles often used. Hope this brings some solution at least to the different titles used worldwide. However the US definition remains a major concern if the article does not clearly specify it is a US-centric article only.Mrm7171 (talk) 02:13, 30 July 2014 (UTC)
- A problem I've noticed is the article tends to relay what studies "suggest" as what studies "show" instead. You can't learn anything for sure about the US (or Zaire or Italy) by looking at a sample. It's a little more complicated than just changing those words, more of a running theme here. But I'll change those exact words, for now. InedibleHulk (talk) 02:25, July 30, 2014 (UTC)
- Fair points. I'm also wondering why entire sections (eg.Occupational stress and 'cardiovascular disease') of the article are based solely on research quoted from other disciplines, while the authors of this article refer to this research as being "OHP research" or "OHP researchers" etc. Examples are research drawn from separate fields such as occupational medicine? Also, as far as I can tell, the field began in 1990? (it looks like)? but again, the 2 main article authors psyc12 & iss246 quote research from decades before even, and again call it OHP research? Anyway, I'm not sure if I'm missing something here? Would appreciate other editors points of view. I would really like to work through these issues and bring the article up to standard, if possible.Mrm7171 (talk) 02:35, 30 July 2014 (UTC)
- The term OHP is not just American, but it is used/recognized throughout the world, e.g., the UK journal Work & Stress refers to occupational health psychologists on the inside cover. NIOSH cannot be equated with OHP--it is just a government funding agency that has funded some OHP grants in the U.S. There is no NIOSH, Society of OHP or American-specific versions of OHP, and this OHP article includes references from all over the world.
- InedibleHulk. I would delete mention of APA and NIOSH in the opening paragraph of the article. Their involvement in OHP is just in the U.S.--they had nothing to do with development of the field in Europe and elsewhere. It adds clutter to the opening which is rather cluttered now, and there's repetition between the first and second paragraphs. The article now mentions them in the history section, which seems to best place. Psyc12 (talk) 13:46, 30 July 2014 (UTC)
- I totally disagree. I think this edit is fine. It also highlights the obvious point that this article is almost entirely USA-centric. NIOSH, CDC. You and your close friend/colleague outside of Wikipedia, have authored this grossly biased article from start to finish. You are both from the US OHP society. How on earth is this article representative of a worldwide view psyc12?Mrm7171 (talk) 14:24, 30 July 2014 (UTC)
- The OHP entry is built on research from Sweden, the UK, the Netherlands, Germany, Switzerland, Finland, Canada, the US, and elsewhere. The entry is not narrowly focused on a US point of view. I remind readers that US researchers, like researchers in other countries, do not have one point of view on any topic. That the definition from the CDC was settled 7 months ago. Iss246 (talk) 15:05, 30 July 2014 (UTC)
- Again I ask why entire sections (eg.the Occupational stress and 'cardiovascular disease' header) of the article are based solely on research quoted from other disciplines, while the authors of this article refer to this research as being "OHP research" or "OHP researchers" etc. Examples are research drawn from separate fields such as occupational medicine?
- I answer your question. Occupational medicine has traditionally been concerned with physical factors that affect health (e.g., heavy lifting; exposure to toxic chemicals). OHP is concerned with psychosocial factors that affect health (e.g., decision latitude; the supportiveness of coworkers). Iss246 (talk) 03:59, 31 July 2014 (UTC)
- Also, as far as I can tell, the field began in 1990? (it looks like)? but again, the 2 main article authors psyc12 & iss246 quote research from decades before even, and again call it OHP research? Am I missing something here?Mrm7171 (talk) 16:01, 30 July 2014 (UTC)
- Psyc12 & iss246. These 2 questions/points are left unanswered still? They are in addition to the other clear points above that I have specifically detailed, outlining exactly why I believe the article is biased. However you both keep avoiding answering them and then say I don't give reasons why I believe the article is biased? Very odd. Will await your detailed reply please. As a courtesy please don't remove correct tags from the article until these issues are fully resolved.Mrm7171 (talk) 00:16, 31 July 2014 (UTC)
- Mrm7171. Research on OHP topics is done by people in different disciplines. For example, Tores Theorell is a Swedish physician who does research on occupational stress and health. Citing him in the article does not reflect an American bias--he's not an American. As for work prior to 1990, the study of OHP topics goes back well before the term came into use. Barling (a South African now in Canada) and Christie in their "A Short History of Occupational Health Psychology" (In A-S Antoniou & Cooper New Directions in Organizational Psychology and Behavioral Medicine) traced some "of the most seminal contributions to the field" that predate 1990. This included Robert Kahn's work on occupational stress in the 1960s, Jeffrey Greenhaus and Nicholas Beutell's work and family conflict in the 1980s, and Dov Zohar's work on occupational safety climate in 1980.
- Citing work outside of psychology or work published prior to 1990 does not constitute an American or Society of Occupational Health Psychology bias. Furthermore, you have not given us any evidence that such biases in fact exist. Apparently, Houdmont and Leka (from the UK) don't seem to think it exists. They say in their 2010 book Occupational Health Psychology, "debate on the nature and scope of OHP has crystallized and consensus has developed among academics and practitioners on its aims and objectives" p. 2 and later "despite the absence of a shared heritage across the international OHP community, broad agreement on the nature of the discipline can be found in the definitions advanced by the discipline's European and North American representative bodies." p. 5.Psyc12 (talk) 12:51, 31 July 2014 (UTC)
- Mrm7171 was blocked for six months for edit warring. Dougweller (talk) 09:50, 6 August 2014 (UTC)
This article appears very biased:
- Anonymous editors constantly add US organisations to the article, like the FBI and NSA, without supporting citations.
- I've only been able to verify a handful of obvious examples. I've even included quotes in citations.
- The article seems to cry out for a complete overhaul, despite attempting to draft a general definition (e.g. forced disappearances, arbitrary detention).
- I feel that in the worst case scenario, the article may never satisfy WP:NPOV, possibly making it eligible for deletion.
I've stopped editing that article pending further opinion from here. --Marianian(talk) 09:04, 30 July 2014 (UTC)
- Articles about secret things are inherently hard to verify. Once we start learning more, they stop being secret and disappear (from the article). If we don't mention them in the article, they remain secret and disappear (from Wikipedia). I think the title of the article is disclaimer enough, though yeah, its existence is a bit of a pickle. InedibleHulk (talk) 02:34, August 2, 2014 (UTC)
- The current concept of the article seems to blur the line between unanimously agreed "secret police" organisations like the Stasi of East Germany and intelligence organisations with merely questionable practices, bearing in mind that the term "secret police" isn't usually taken literally. I think this article isn't getting the right attention, especially when it is vulnerable to alternative theories that don't have the approval of even the most reputable of human rights organisation possible. --Marianian(talk) 18:53, 2 August 2014 (UTC)
- The article does not provide and I cannot find any literature about "secret police", just articles about secret police in different countries. We need to find a body of literature before we can determine which organizations belong. And we cannot provide a list unless we do that. The list is therefore OR and should be deleted. TFD (talk) 17:13, 5 August 2014 (UTC)
- I agree. The list is a mess. If someone nominates if for deletion, please notify me. Niteshift36 (talk) 17:18, 5 August 2014 (UTC)
- Done, possibly WP:OR and missing critical citations. --Marianian(talk) 19:30, 5 August 2014 (UTC)
Women in science
Hi fellow editors. I am wondering if this article titled Women in science is expressing a POV or NPOV. I just read some interesting comments on the talk page and although I disagree with the editor stating it is POV I thought it may be good to get other peoples opinion on the article itself. As a woman and a scientist I think that the article is worthwhile. Thanks to any one who offers comments in advance.Docsim (talk) 13:05, 31 July 2014 (UTC)
- i have noticed no comments on this topic so far. on that article page there is another editor complaining that there is no equivalent men in science article. not sure if this whole issue is too controversial? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Docsim (talk • contribs) 01:49, 2 August 2014 (UTC)
- There doesn't seem to be any current controversy. That single talk page comment from an IP is from November of last year; I think the concern has been responded to adequately on the talk page, at this point. I don't see any serious challenge to the article as a whole, as it represents a neutral description of clear and source-recognized academic topic, based on and sourced to wide range of published and cited work from better academic sources.__ E L A Q U E A T E 18:40, 2 August 2014 (UTC)
- I saw a number of comments on that talk page. main thing is that the editors that did comment in 2013 are wrong. the article does not seem like a POV to me either and seems very good.Docsim (talk) 13:26, 3 August 2014 (UTC)
- There doesn't seem to be any current controversy. That single talk page comment from an IP is from November of last year; I think the concern has been responded to adequately on the talk page, at this point. I don't see any serious challenge to the article as a whole, as it represents a neutral description of clear and source-recognized academic topic, based on and sourced to wide range of published and cited work from better academic sources.__ E L A Q U E A T E 18:40, 2 August 2014 (UTC)
Israel/Gaza RFC
The following RFC could use additional input and may be of interest to the members of this noticeboard Talk:2014_Israel–Gaza_conflict#RFC Gaijin42 (talk) 17:32, 1 August 2014 (UTC)
Abiogenesis: hypothetical science, or proven fact?
The opening sentence of the Abiogenesis article treats abiogenesis as a proven fact, calling it a "natural process". Yet the article itself says abiogenesis was originally coined as a 'hypothesis' and that 'There is still no "standard model"' for the theory, listing many alternative hypotheses for how abiogenisis might have happened. In other words, several competing hypotheses prove abiogenesis is not hypothetical!? How does that make sense?
If abiogenesis has been scientifically proven by observed processes, and we now have proof how non-living matter became living matter, then this needs to be made clear in the article and all the incorrect, outdated hypotheses need to labeled so. If, however, abiogenesis has not been scientifically established and remains theoretical (as would seem to be the case), then the opening sentence of the article needs to indicate that it is hypothetical science (much like, say, the article for Dark Matter).
I tried to raise this concern in the talk section and was accused of trying to promote a non-neutral agenda! On the contrary! I am trying to promote neutrality and honesty. I assert that the article is NOT neutral and its opening sentence is the result of unscientific personal bias akin to superstition. Grand Dizzy (talk) 15:11, 3 August 2014 (UTC)
- From reading the article, it seems that abiogenesis is accepted as something that occurs in nature, but there are competing theories as to exactly how it occurs. In other words... abiogenesis is accepted as being fact, but there is disagreement in the scientific community as to the details of abiogenesis. Correct me if I have it wrong... it isn't my field. Blueboar (talk) 15:35, 3 August 2014 (UTC)
- Agree. Abiogenesis is a fact (the two alternatives are no life ever, which I refute by example) or life forever (which conflicts with e.g. the Big Bang scenario). How exactly it happened is something we don't know yet. But then there is very little that we know exactly (we are lacking e.g. a unified theory of quantum gravity, without which very little in this universe is understood "exactly"). --Stephan Schulz (talk) 15:50, 4 August 2014 (UTC)
- Agree with Blueboar and Stephan Schulz. Grand Dizzy asked, on the talk page, when abiogenesis was proved to be categorically true. Stephan Schulz has provided a proof that, if the Big Bang theory is correct, abiogenesis is also categorically true. There are fringe theories that life on Earth came from somewhere else rather than by abiogenesis on Earth, but they still imply abiogenesis somewhere. Grand Dizzy's comments should not have been hatted. The hatting of those comments, even if they proceeded from a misunderstanding, was quite out of line, and should be reversed. It was a valid question. (More generally, in my opinion, some editors are 'far too willing to hat comments that they would rather not address.) Robert McClenon (talk) 16:10, 4 August 2014 (UTC)
Related discussion on George M. Church
...is taking place at the COI Noticeboard here, [16]. It is a thorny issue, of a Harvard Prof and wife contributing two thirds of all article content on the Prof (including a 2013 edit that more than doubled the biographical content of the article), and basing primacy of discovery claims on the Prof's own published primary sources (raising COI/POV issues, but also OR issues in the editor's choosing between primary sources). A further issue is the overly positive tone of their article, and the lack of substantive coverage of controversies engendered by the Prof's statements and writings. Please chime in there if non-independence/autobiographical matters (or original research in science writing) is in your area of WP expertise or interest. Le Prof Leprof 7272 (talk) 22:47, 5 August 2014 (UTC)
Malaysian Airways Flight MH 17
I wish to raise concerns about Stickee who appears to be using the lead to give the impression that the airliner was brought down by Pro-Russian separatists when in fact an investigation is under way. They are taking sources which report 'beliefs' and trying to present these as though they are established facts. It really would take too much time to argue with him. A balanced opening should begin with facts and then have claim and coutner claim, that's neutral and responsible. Please intervene. See talk and recent edits on this article Sceptic1954 (talk) 09:55, 6 August 2014 (UTC)
- First things first, it's Malaysia Airlines Flight 17, not "Malaysian Airways".
- I absolutely agree that factual and objective coverage is the way to go here. But I'm just as convinced it can't possibly happen. Theoretically, sure. But it goes way beyond Stickee, Wikipedia, this plane or any one state's disinformation machine. I suggest surrender. InedibleHulk (talk) 10:19, August 6, 2014 (UTC)
- The bulk of reliable sources favor the widely held opinion that MH17 was shot down with a Buk missile from rebel-held territory. The sources that claim otherwise are generally the Russian media and some conspiracy-oriented web papers in the West. There is considerable opposition on the article's talk page to inclusion of any suspected cause for MH17's crash on the grounds that "not all the facts are in", etc. This is false balance and contrary to the guidelines. WP is not a court, there is no due process here, and this isn't a BLP article. There is no good reason to avoid including facts that are widely covered by RS. Self-censorship on those grounds is a terrible idea and contrary to the way we do things here. I do not oppose including Russian perspectives on the matter, but we should not even consider censoring the views of Western governments when those seem to dominate RS, whether it's for "fairness" or "world peace" or any of the other suggestions that have been floated there in the short existence of the article. Geogene (talk) 18:21, 6 August 2014 (UTC)