Template:Did you know nominations/Zayn al-Din Qaraja

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The result was: promoted by Cielquiparle (talk) 12:59, 20 May 2023 (UTC)

Zayn al-Din Qaraja

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... that Zayn al-Din Qaraja was the founder of the Beylik of Dulkadir? Source: https://referenceworks.brillonline.com/entries/encyclopaedia-of-islam-3/dulkadir-COM_27743
- ALT1: ... that Zayn al-Din Qaraja was imprisoned and executed by the Mamluk Sultanate after he declared the Beylik of Dulkadir independent? Source: https://dergipark.org.tr/en/download/article-file/1725218 Pages 85-86
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/2022 Bahamas Bowl

Improved to Good Article status by Aintabli (talk). Nominated by Onegreatjoke (talk) at 15:20, 29 March 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Zayn al-Din Qaraja; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: the hook needs more work espically for a worrier. I will come back with some recommendation but feel free to recommend some since you probably know the article better FuzzyMagma (talk) 22:16, 1 April 2023 (UTC)

after further deliberations, I think the hook looks ok. FuzzyMagma (talk) 17:08, 6 April 2023 (UTC)