Template:Did you know nominations/Strange Fruit (novel)

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 10:25, 30 October 2012 (UTC)

Strange Fruit (novel)[edit]

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... that Lillian Smith's Strange Fruit was banned from being mailed within the United States until First LadyEleanor Roosevelt requested that her husband repeal the ban?

Alt1... that while Lillian Smith's Strange Fruit was banned in Boston shortly after its release, a censored version of the play was able to play within the city the year after?

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Comment: I had another idea for a DYK but didn't know where to put it, so I'm putting it here. I do prefer the first DYK if only one can be chosen, though. It's kind of neat that she personally requested that the PS ban be lifted.Tokyogirl79 (talk) 10:15, 17 October 2012 (UTC)

Created/expanded by Tokyogirl79 (talk). Self nom at 18:46, 16 October 2012 (UTC)

The hook's grammar seems a little off ("and" feels like the wrong conjunction). I'd suggest a corrected one, but for some reason people are seeing that as a COI leading to me not ultimately being able to give a tick. Otherwise hook is fine. Article is new enough, long enough, well-cited. No close paraphrasing on the refs I've checked. Only image has a FUR, solid enough for DYK purposes.

Summary: Fix the hook's grammar and this is peachy. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:51, 28 October 2012 (UTC)

Any suggestions? Grammar isn't really my strongest point... I tried changing it- let me know what you think!Tokyogirl79 (talk) 16:17, 28 October 2012 (UTC)

Suggest slightly tweaked hook:

ALT2... that the ban on mailing Lillian Smith's Strange Fruit within the United States was repealed upon a request from the First Lady, Eleanor Roosevelt?

Yazan (talk) 16:35, 28 October 2012 (UTC)

That's good. ALT2 looks fine. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 22:17, 28 October 2012 (UTC)

Thanks! It looks great!Tokyogirl79 (talk) 13:38, 29 October 2012 (UTC)