Template:Did you know nominations/Dragonriders of Pern (video game)

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The result was: rejected by Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:33, 15 January 2012 (UTC)

Dragonriders of Pern (video game)

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• ... that Jim Connelley left Epyx shortly after releasing Dragonriders of Pern, during a "battle for the creative vision" of the company?-->

Created/expanded by Maury Markowitz (talk). Self nom at 21:29, 20 December 2011 (UTC)

• Minor issue: missing wikiproject assessment template on talk, please add. More important issue: the hook is to literary; I'd suggest an alt with "in what was described as a battle for..." or such. Reification is not a good encyclopedic style. --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk to me} 11:17, 25 December 2011 (UTC)

Actually the quote was just plain wrong, I have corrected in the article and here. I do not understand the first part of your note that, the what what where? Maury Markowitz (talk) 16:01, 28 December 2011 (UTC)

Reviewed Ferrari 250 GT Lusso Maury Markowitz (talk) 18:41, 21 December 2011 (UTC)

• I don't understand that talk page problem either, but there seems to be a template with an assessment now. However, the article is based entirely on four sources--none of which are reliable sources, are far as I can tell. The hook is hardly exciting given that Jim Connelley is not, apparently, a notable person and his leaving the company is therefore unlikely to create a lot of interest. The article is well-written enough--but with this sourcing, it should not go to the frontpage. Sorry. Drmies (talk) 04:17, 14 January 2012 (UTC)