Talk:Sorga Ka Toedjoe

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Date	Process	Result
June 11, 2013	Good article nominee	Listed
May 29, 2013	Peer review	Reviewed
July 23, 2013	Featured article candidate	Promoted
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on June 20, 2013. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the Wong brothers' film Sorga Ka Toedjoe was the first in which Roekiah did not act alongside Rd. Mochtar?
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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Drmies (talk · contribs) 03:51, 11 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
(major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Crisco, why'd you trim the second image? Drmies (talk) 03:54, 11 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Focus on Roekiah and Landauw, otherwise it would be unclear at thumbnail size. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 04:02, 11 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  - Well, I guess I could stand this (with full image). Looks a little long though. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 04:06, 11 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    - What I like about the "longer" image is the name of the movie in it, and its lively background. The shorter one fits the text better, I'll grant you that. Up to you. Drmies (talk) 04:22, 11 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Can you rephrase "extensively featured"? It sounds like K-pop writing. Moreover, the 30 October 1940 review praises the music and says it was supervised by Kartolo--the latter point is worthwhile mentioning in the lead since he has an article and was a songwriter as well. It notes that several other actors came from the "world of music"--I think that's enough for a sentence or two in the Production section. [Update: wait, you have that covered to some extent with "Roekiah, Kartolo, Landauw, and Titing were experienced kroncong singers." So nevermind, I suppose--"NVM"?] Drmies (talk)

Done, and expanded anyways. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 04:57, 11 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Remove your "sic" in note c: is it the spelling of "tafereelen"? That's normal for the time, a double e for an open syllable with a long e. Drmies (talk) 04:22, 11 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Done, and yes that was the issue. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 04:57, 11 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I am well pleased. Congratulations, good work. Someday the government of Indonesia will give you a medal. Drmies (talk) 05:04, 11 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for the review, good Doctor. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 05:18, 11 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]