Talk:Pyramids (song)/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 22:34, 14 July 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose):
   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references):
   b (citations to reliable sources):
   c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects):
   b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Infobox

• Nothing in article to support that the song was released as a digital download

Added reference.

• Information in article needed to support the information about the song's genre, record label, writers, and producers

Added references for all.

Lead

• On June 7 of 2012, Ocean posted a small teaser video... → Change "June 7 of 2012" to "June 7, 2012" for better prose
• Ocean performed "Pyramids" during his 14 show Channel Orange tour through North America. → Not sure if "14 show" is necessary

Both done

Background

• No issues

Composition

• No issues

Reception

• No issues

Promotion

• No issues

Chart

• No issues

References

• No issues

After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put it on hold at this time. I will give you the general seven days to fix these mistakes and/or address issues which you believe do not affect good article status. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 23:12, 14 July 2012 (UTC)

I believe I have addressed the complaints. Bruce Campbell (talk) 00:30, 15 July 2012 (UTC)

Since all issues have been addressed, I feel confident passing this article. Congratulations and keep up the good work! Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 04:59, 15 July 2012 (UTC)