Talk:Brian Sterling-Vete

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This reads like self-authored publicity puff[edit]

Untitled[edit]

Hi--I am a newbie, so I will try to get the links fixed. I used some examples and read a lot on citation links, but I obviously didn't get them right. We will do so.

That said, I'm very confused. I see an afd request on the page. One place, it shows that in one day (before I could comment), it was deleted, and in another, shows it is to be kept but needs editing.

Can someone clarify for me what I need to do to keep this article up and improve my links, references, etc.? I truly believe we have met all the requirements for notability, and there is more I could add for citations and references if I have a chance to do so.

I would very much appreciate some guidance on this!

Thanks


Lkcarnes (talk) 18:09, 24 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Rescue Squad - I need direction on how to fix links[edit]

Hi--I have read a lot of articles about what I should/shouldn't do with links on this page.

I am frankly just not sure how they should be fixed, but if someone could give me the top 1-3 things to do to fix them, I will do so immediately. I want to make sure I do whatever I need to in order to make this page right and save it.

Many thanks in advance from the newbie

Lkcarnes (talk) 16:50, 25 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Use internal rather than external links to Wikki Pages. Remove infomtion that can't be referenced by an external source Bihco (talk) 07:34, 26 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Promotional vehicle[edit]

This page reads as a promo for its subject. Suggest radical trimming down to info supported by third-parties. The Interior (Talk) 18:37, 21 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I edited the page to address the issues raised--self promotion and deleted some info that can't be verified online by third parties. I do have question--not everything has internet-available validation, but the information is nonetheless true. I left information in that is true and valid that rounds out the background and accomplishments.

I request validation and would like to get the article back to its original form, without the warnings. If there is more that needs to be done, I am happy to address changes that make sense. Lkcarnes (talk) 12:42, 12 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I see the nominator is out until July and nobody has joined in on this conversation in almost two months. I am removing the notifications for now, and if the nominator wants to raise this conversation again upon return, I will be happy to work with them to address any remaining issues, if any. Lkcarnes (talk) 14:14, 13 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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