Talk:26 Broadway

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 17:44, 11 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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26 Broadway
26 Broadway

5x expanded by Epicgenius (talk). Self-nominated at 17:35, 4 February 2020 (UTC).[reply]

  • This impressive five-fold expansion is new enough and long enough. The hook facts for ALT3 are cited inline, the image is appropriately licensed, the article is neutral and I detected no copyright issues. A QPQ has been done. I have not checked the other hooks because they seemed less interesting to a general audience. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:57, 17 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Vami IV (talk · contribs) 09:37, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]


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@Vami IV: Thanks for the review. I have addressed all your comments above. epicgenius (talk) 15:20, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Prose[edit]

  • that is inspired was inspired.
    •  Done
  • as well as above the 18th and 22nd Shorten "as well as" to "and".
    •  Done
  • it consists of a recessed double-height arch, with elaborately carved spandrels at the top of the arch. Consider "at its top".
    •  Done
  • these doorways are located within doorways topped by pediments and clocks. Replace the first "doorways" with something else.
  • "Features": Atlas Obscura, which uses user-generated material, is not a reliable source.
    • I thought so. This is a direct quote, but minus Removed anyway. epicgenius (talk) 15:20, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Move the image in "Initial structure" to the right.
    •  Done
  • "Twenty-six Broadway was once to oil what 1600 Pennsylvania Avenue [the White House] is to politics." Just use the White Houses's address to link the White House here.
    •  Done
  • every cent any of [Standard Oil's subsidiaries] made found its way to 26 Broadway" reads weird
    •  Fixed myself after finishing the review, after after I had a staircase wit moment and remembered this, by removing "any" –♠Vami_IV†♠ 11:31, 6 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • After World War I, Walter C. Teagle Who?
    •  Done
  • (died 1928) Delete.
  • The content of "Tenats#Former" should be carefully inserted into "History".
    •  Done
  • A third, the Urban Assembly School of Business for Young Women, is a high school serving grades 9-12. When did this open?
    •  Done 2005.
  • Starting in 2008, the PS 234 elementary school was supposed to have used [...] subsequently deemed "not appropriate for kindergartners" This would make this school not a current tenant. Shorten and send this sentence and its citation into "History"
    •  Done
  • [67]:540 This is the only instance of this form of citation in the article. The [67] part also already has the page number(s).
    • minus Removed

GA progress[edit]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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