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2 May 2024

• diffhist Kelvin‎ 06:41 −151‎ ‎NebY talk contribs‎ (Restore much-improved lead. WP:OVERSIMPLIFY doesn't mean ignore MOS:LEAD (give basics in a nutshell and cultivate interest in reading on, in clear accessible style), only that content should be included in article. MOS:LEADLENGTH "suggestions about lead length [that] may be useful" are to avoid lead that "is intimidating, difficult to read, and may cause the reader to lose interest" - breaking into 3 brief paras serves to advance this purpose. Intro of scale sufficient, early, clear.) Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
• diffhist Kelvin‎ 06:04 +1,385‎ ‎Mathnerd314159 talk contribs‎ (Lead should be at most 2 paragraphs per MOS:LEADLENGTH. Most of the article is about the scale so the scale should be prominent in the lead, rather than at the end. Give full definition of the Kelvin scale per WP:OVERSIMPLIFY. Add triple point back to lead as the value is still in common use. Add explanatory note on absolute uncertainty.)
• diffhist Kelvin‎ 00:16 +30‎ ‎Em3rgent0rdr talk contribs‎ (joules had yet to be introduced, so spell out this first instance of it hyperlinked joules. And spell out kelvin here too, cause J*K^-1 may be a little too technical expression for new readers to process.) Tag: Visual edit

1 May 2024

• diffhist Kelvin‎ 22:43 −39‎ ‎Em3rgent0rdr talk contribs‎ (→‎2019 redefinition: rewording more closely to the wording in the Newell article.) Tag: Visual edit
• diffhist Kelvin‎ 22:35 +29‎ ‎Em3rgent0rdr talk contribs‎ (→‎2019 redefinition: A bit problematic to say "water still freezes at 273.15 K". The cited Newell article says "the numerical values ... each with a sufficient number of digits to maintain consistency" so I'm rewording to say that the number of significant digits in 273.15 is enough to contain the uncertainty...) Tag: Visual edit
• diffhist m Arcturus‎ 22:22 +1‎ ‎Coalcity58 talk contribs‎ (→‎Cultural significance: comma after introductory clause) Tag: Visual edit
• diffhist m Arcturus‎ 22:16 0‎ ‎Coalcity58 talk contribs‎ (→‎Physical characteristics: Rewording to vary sentence structure.) Tag: Visual edit
• diffhist m Arcturus‎ 22:12 +1‎ ‎Coalcity58 talk contribs‎ (→‎Physical characteristics) Tag: Visual edit
• diffhist Kelvin‎ 21:52 −5‎ ‎Em3rgent0rdr talk contribs‎ (removed unnecessary "was" and "to" by using past tense.) Tag: Visual edit
• diffhist m NGC 5683‎ 21:18 +112‎ ‎C messier talk contribs‎ (±Category:NGC objects; ±Category:Principal Galaxies Catalogue objects using HotCat)
• diffhist Kelvin‎ 19:51 −163‎ ‎Em3rgent0rdr talk contribs‎ (I wanted to tweak my wording on triple point...but found that even trying to talk about the triple point is too much for intro, and because it is an obsolete standard, I'm deciding I'll leave it out of intro. There's more stuff in History anyway.) Tag: Visual edit
• diffhist Kelvin‎ 15:13 −6‎ ‎Em3rgent0rdr talk contribs‎ (slightly shorten wording) Tag: Visual edit
• diffhist Kelvin‎ 14:59 −18‎ ‎Em3rgent0rdr talk contribs‎ (shorten my wording) Tag: Visual edit
• diffhist Kelvin‎ 14:58 +22‎ ‎Em3rgent0rdr talk contribs‎ (hyperlinking these other temperature scales) Tag: Visual edit
• diffhist Kelvin‎ 14:55 −13‎ ‎Em3rgent0rdr talk contribs‎ (don't need this T now) Tag: Visual edit
• diffhist Kelvin‎ 14:51 −19‎ ‎Em3rgent0rdr talk contribs‎ (too many k's here...just leaving out Boltzman's k.) Tag: Visual edit
• diffhist Kelvin‎ 14:46 −50‎ ‎Em3rgent0rdr talk contribs‎ (the amount of uncertainty of water's triple point may be too much info for intro, so am leaving as "now has a small uncertainty". The 2019 redefinition section talks about the relative standard uncertainty.) Tag: Visual edit
• diffhist Kelvin‎ 14:40 +16‎ ‎Em3rgent0rdr talk contribs‎ (rather than "now" I'd better had used "as of 2019" cause SI says "At the time of adopting the present definition" and actually that number is "relative standard uncertainty") Tag: Visual edit
• diffhist Kelvin‎ 14:31 +61‎ ‎Em3rgent0rdr talk contribs‎ (hyperlinking 1954 to the conference meeting list) Tag: Visual edit
• diffhist Kelvin‎ 14:26 −24‎ ‎Em3rgent0rdr talk contribs‎ (→‎Precursors: shorten wording and using °C instead of "degrees") Tag: Visual edit
• diffhist Kelvin‎ 14:22 −9‎ ‎Em3rgent0rdr talk contribs‎ (rewording on previous definition...clarifying this is an "experimental uncertainty") Tag: Visual edit
• diffhist Kelvin‎ 14:18 +116‎ ‎Em3rgent0rdr talk contribs‎ (triple point rewording...more specifically 3.7X10^-7) Tag: Visual edit
• diffhist Kelvin‎ 14:07 +6‎ ‎Em3rgent0rdr talk contribs‎ (really should have said that kelvin is defined using Boltzman. Then in later sentence talk about triple point.) Tag: Visual edit
• diffhist Kelvin‎ 13:59 −14‎ ‎Em3rgent0rdr talk contribs‎ (remove unnecessary wording) Tag: Visual edit
• diffhist Kelvin‎ 13:40 +3‎ ‎Em3rgent0rdr talk contribs‎ (since previous paragraph start with "Historically," will start next paragraph in similar manner "Since the 2019 redefinition of the SI...") Tag: Visual edit
• diffhist Kelvin‎ 13:37 +2‎ ‎Em3rgent0rdr talk contribs‎ (putting boltzman constant in parenthesis to help parsing.) Tag: Visual edit
• diffhist Kelvin‎ 13:33 −21‎ ‎Em3rgent0rdr talk contribs‎ (For brevity, just say Kelvin is a "scientist" rather than "engineer and physicist".) Tag: Visual edit
• diffhist Kelvin‎ 13:29 +6‎ ‎Em3rgent0rdr talk contribs‎ (swap these sentences order around cause first need to know concept of Boltzman constant (k) before talking about kT.) Tag: Visual edit
• diffhist Kelvin‎ 13:27 −16‎ ‎Em3rgent0rdr talk contribs‎ (Move absolute zero stuff to first paragraph, because it is crucial to concept of the kelvin. Move more technical stuff on 1K change's thermodynamic temperature to be later cause is more technical.) Tag: Visual edit
• diffhist Kelvin‎ 13:16 −6‎ ‎Em3rgent0rdr talk contribs‎ (define symbol °C and abbreviate with symbol and number.) Tag: Visual edit
• diffhist Kelvin‎ 13:12 −10‎ ‎Em3rgent0rdr talk contribs‎ (remove unnecessary wording) Tag: Visual edit
• diffhist Kelvin‎ 13:10 −19‎ ‎Em3rgent0rdr talk contribs‎ (removed unnecessary redundant wording between first two sentences.) Tag: Visual edit
• diffhist Kelvin‎ 12:08 −65‎ ‎NebY talk contribs‎ (→‎top: That got extremely technical very fast, not suitable for general readers. Bringing the SI status and naming of the unit forward, allowing the material about 1.380649×10−23 J etc its own paragraph (which tbh many readers will skip). Dropping the gloss about the comparatively unusual prefixed forms as an unnecessary digression for the lead.) Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
• diffhist Kelvin‎ 03:58 −9‎ ‎Mathnerd314159 talk contribs‎ (repeat "temperature" in piped "scale" link for WP:TRANSPARENCY)

30 April 2024

• diffhist Kelvin‎ 18:16 −30‎ ‎Mathnerd314159 talk contribs‎ (de-stack other images modified in revision 1107565423)
• diffhist Kelvin‎ 16:31 −10‎ ‎Em3rgent0rdr talk contribs‎ (→‎History: Don't know why {{stack}} was used, but it messes up the display on desktop, because the infobox pushes it left)
• diffhist Template:Boötes‎ 11:16 +38‎ ‎JeBonSer talk contribs‎
• diffhist SDSSCGB 10189‎ 10:45 +84‎ ‎JeBonSer talk contribs‎
• diffhist PGC 1470080‎ 10:41 +70‎ ‎JeBonSer talk contribs‎
• diffhist NGC 5683‎ 10:34 +1‎ ‎Galaxybeing talk contribs‎ (No edit summary) Tag: Visual edit
• diffhist m SDSSCGB 10189‎ 09:53 −6‎ ‎Onel5969 talk contribs‎ (clean up, added orphan tag) Tag: AWB
• diffhist m Kelvin‎ 04:32 +1‎ ‎GünniX talk contribs‎ (ref name) Tag: AWB
• diffhist SDSSCGB 10189‎ 01:25 +70‎ ‎Ryan shell talk contribs‎ (minor prose tweaks in effort to destub)

29 April 2024

• diffhist ULAS J1342+0928‎ 19:19 −1‎ ‎Sadustu Tau talk contribs‎ (UHZ1)
• diffhist m SDSSCGB 10189‎ 12:52 −62‎ ‎Ira Leviton talk contribs‎ (Fixed references. Please see Category:CS1 errors: dates.)
• diffhist m PGC 1470080‎ 10:07 −7‎ ‎Gronk Oz talk contribs‎ (Clean up, added orphan tag, typo(s) fixed: phenomena → phenomenon) Tag: AWB
• diffhist SDSSCGB 10189‎ 09:32 −1‎ ‎Galaxybeing talk contribs‎ (No edit summary) Tag: Visual edit
• diffhist N SDSSCGB 10189‎ 09:24 +5,610‎ ‎Galaxybeing talk contribs‎ (Created SDSSCGB 10189) Tag: Visual edit
• diffhist Light-year‎ 09:20 +36‎ ‎JDAWiseman talk contribs‎ (→‎Usage of term)
• Page curation log 06:40 BoyTheKingCanDance talk contribs marked the article PGC 1470080 as reviewed ‎ Tag: PageTriage