User contributions for Em3rgent0rdr
A user with 6,155 edits. Account created on 25 November 2010.
30 April 2024
- 16:3116:31, 30 April 2024 diff hist −10 Kelvin →History: Don't know why {{stack}} was used, but it messes up the display on desktop, because the infobox pushes it left
- 16:2616:26, 30 April 2024 diff hist −336 Beat (acoustics) →Mathematics and physics of beat tones: dramatically shorten wording and label "carrier" and "envelope" with underbrace in equation to make easier to read. Use blockquote formatting for direct quote. Add hyperlinks. current Tag: Visual edit
28 April 2024
- 03:5003:50, 28 April 2024 diff hist +455 Beat (acoustics) Add sentence paragraph on being same as ham radio "zero-beating" Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 03:2603:26, 28 April 2024 diff hist −22 Pierce oscillator add couple hyperlinks and slightly shorten wording current Tag: Visual edit
27 April 2024
- 19:1519:15, 27 April 2024 diff hist +13 Phone connector (audio) keeping electric guitar link cause was useful Tag: Visual edit
- 19:1419:14, 27 April 2024 diff hist 0 Phone connector (audio) for style consistency with previous editor's "script-assisted" edit, removing capitalization here too. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:5218:52, 27 April 2024 diff hist +971 Talk:Group delay and phase delay →First line is wrong: Reply current Tag: Reply
- 18:2918:29, 27 April 2024 diff hist −12 Sun use SI unit of "kilograms" instead of ambiguous "tons" current Tag: Visual edit
- 16:2716:27, 27 April 2024 diff hist +1 Electronic color code In practice, would say "2.26 kilo ohms" instead of "2260 ohms", especially since its precision is much worse than 0.1% current Tag: Visual edit
- 14:3614:36, 27 April 2024 diff hist +289 Talk:Button cell →Merge non-rechargable table and rechargable table into one table: Reply current Tag: Reply
- 14:1514:15, 27 April 2024 diff hist +422 Talk:Button cell →Merge non-rechargable table and rechargable table into one table: new section Tag: New topic
- 12:1712:17, 27 April 2024 diff hist +32 Delay-locked loop This article needs a lot of improvement. For now flagging as {{single source}} current Tag: Visual edit
26 April 2024
- 03:0003:00, 26 April 2024 diff hist 0 Rechargeable battery →Charging and discharging: "releasing" and "absorbing" instead of "producing" and "consuming" because no electrons are actually produced. Tag: Visual edit
- 02:5502:55, 26 April 2024 diff hist +145 m Rechargeable battery →Applications: flagging "relatively rapidly" as {{vague}} Tag: Visual edit
25 April 2024
- 16:4316:43, 25 April 2024 diff hist −34 Double bass →Terminology: Shorten Ron Carter's caption and no quotes around venue. Tag: Visual edit
22 April 2024
- 05:0605:06, 22 April 2024 diff hist −14 How Deep Is the Ocean? →Lyrics: shorten current Tag: Visual edit
- 05:0505:05, 22 April 2024 diff hist +6 How Deep Is the Ocean? →Lyrics: this question appears twice Tag: Visual edit
- 05:0405:04, 22 April 2024 diff hist −14 How Deep Is the Ocean? →Lyrics: shorten Tag: Visual edit
- 04:5804:58, 22 April 2024 diff hist +4 How Deep Is the Ocean? →Lyrics: parenthesis Tag: Visual edit
- 03:0103:01, 22 April 2024 diff hist +202 How Deep Is the Ocean? →Background: add subheading on "Lyrics" and just a little explanation on the lyrics. Tag: Visual edit
19 April 2024
- 06:1906:19, 19 April 2024 diff hist +660 Talk:Scott Joplin →Edits: Reply current Tag: Reply
- 06:0906:09, 19 April 2024 diff hist +3 Scott Joplin →Legacy: Block quote is useful because it includes quotes, but I shouldn't have moved its position. Tag: Visual edit
- 05:4305:43, 19 April 2024 diff hist −14 Scott Joplin lede's "traveled to the American South" very confusing wording, because he was already in the South according to previous sentence. Avoiding fancy word "itinerant" and keep brief by just saying "traveled the American South as a musician." Tag: Visual edit
- 05:3205:32, 19 April 2024 diff hist −13 Scott Joplin more brevity in LEDE. Tag: Visual edit
- 05:3005:30, 19 April 2024 diff hist +1,516 Talk:Scott Joplin →Edits: Reply Tag: Reply
- 04:4704:47, 19 April 2024 diff hist −200 Scott Joplin Brevity for LEDE. Restore end of era but without the MOS:WEASEL word which is not necessary. Brevity for my addition to legacy section on adoption by stride, novelty, New Orleans jazz. Tag: Visual edit
- 01:1701:17, 19 April 2024 diff hist 0 Ragtime →Historical context: "Tinge" isn't capitalized for the article Spanish tinge and is better to not capitalized it here either, since is just talking about a type of feel. Tag: Visual edit
18 April 2024
- 05:0405:04, 18 April 2024 diff hist −4 Ragtime →Historical context: rm "Kitten on the Keys" link which is same as Zez Confrey Tag: Visual edit
- 04:5804:58, 18 April 2024 diff hist −71 Ragtime →Historical context: Deleting the "unlike jazz'" and "rather than through recordings or by imitation of live performances" because that is too much to deal with...jazz is has quite a lot of a written tradition, even if not primarily written, and likewise classical music is still learned and consumed though recordings and live performances...would be too much to clarify here so just delete. Tag: Visual edit
- 04:4404:44, 18 April 2024 diff hist +3 Ragtime →Historical context: "proliferation" may be a better word I was looking for...recorded this sentence on sheet music sales. Tag: Visual edit
- 03:0703:07, 18 April 2024 diff hist −4 Ragtime →Historical context: slightly improve flow by starting the novelty piano paragraph with the bit about distribution via piano rolls. Tag: Visual edit
- 03:0003:00, 18 April 2024 diff hist −11 Ragtime →Historical context: slightly improve flow by having "folk ragtime" be mentioned after talking about limitations of amateur pianist playing sheet. Tag: Visual edit
17 April 2024
- 20:1420:14, 17 April 2024 diff hist −50 Ragtime Deleting "The Easy Winners" sheet music image from "Form" section, because the picture doesn't show the full musical form. Instead use an example of the more famous Maple Leaf first page as an example of sheet music where it is relevant wen mention Maple Leaf and sheet music reading in the "Historical context" section. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:0420:04, 17 April 2024 diff hist +182 Ragtime →Historical context: adding an image of an 1885 player piano with a roll and its guts exposed, so readers unfamiliar with this concept have some idea what a "player piano" is. Tag: Visual edit
- 19:5519:55, 17 April 2024 diff hist +54 Ragtime Move images to right side per MOS:IMAGELOC, because having them on the left side messes up bullet list and left alignment of paragraphs. Also try to embed the audio files inside the corresponding image so they aren't separate. Instead of Scott Joplin's image and caption, just add that caption to the Maple Leaf Rag, which already has a picture of Scott Joplin and his name in the image. Maple Leaf with audio is now first, as a good audio example. Tag: Visual edit: Switched
- 19:2319:23, 17 April 2024 diff hist −8 Kelvin shorten wording: don't really need the word "examples" in this infobox, as it may be self-evident that these are examples. Tag: Visual edit
- 19:0819:08, 17 April 2024 diff hist +238 Art Tatum →Early life: instead of a large image of Fats Waller, which may be confusing to skimmers who see such a large image of Waller for this article on someone else (Tatum), I think better to have a smaller multi-image frame of the 3 influences listed (Waller, Johnson, Hines) positioned with the specific paragraph talking pianist influences on Tatum. current Tag: Visual edit
- 18:5318:53, 17 April 2024 diff hist −2 Ragtime →Historical context: Slight tweak in transition wording for slightly better flow. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:4618:46, 17 April 2024 diff hist −53 Ragtime →Historical context: Attempt to improve flow by starting paragraph on novelty with the sentence "Ragtime music was also distributed via piano rolls for player pianos." Then keep previous paragraph focused just on the written tradition primarily, which ends with the sentence on the complexity and enjoyment being limited by sheet music sales (this avoids having it deal with saying "except for piano rolls" now). Also "is" applies to past too, and so suffices instead of "had and has". Tag: Visual edit
- 18:2318:23, 17 April 2024 diff hist +1 Ragtime →Historical context: Again slightly improve transition from traditional ragtime to novelty by starting sentence with "While the traditional rag was fading in popularity, ..." Tag: Visual edit
- 18:1618:16, 17 April 2024 diff hist +58 Ragtime →Historical context: adding "and player pianos" cause there were ragtime piano rolls as this article mentions earlier. Slight rearrange sentences so can transition from ragtime to novelty. "genre" rather than "form" cause novelty is often considered its own genre, not merely just a "form" of ragtime. Tag: Visual edit
- 17:3817:38, 17 April 2024 diff hist +6,475 Talk:Scott Joplin →Edits: Reply Tag: Reply
- 08:3808:38, 17 April 2024 diff hist +6 Tiger Rag →Cover versions: first bullet shouldn't have been a bullet. Reword slightly to introduce the actual bullet list. This list should probably be chronological current
- 08:2508:25, 17 April 2024 diff hist +4 Tiger Rag →Authorship: grammar: possibly missing "the" before "song", unless I'm misunderstanding it. Tag: Visual edit
- 07:2807:28, 17 April 2024 diff hist +320 Talk:Scott Joplin →Edits: Reply Tag: Reply
- 07:1507:15, 17 April 2024 diff hist −207 Scott Joplin →Legacy: avoid run-on sentence issue by removing the quoted part, adding a period, and keeping the (now two) sentences supported by the LOC citation on its own paragraph.LOC on Tag: Visual edit: Switched
- 06:1306:13, 17 April 2024 diff hist +5 Scott Joplin →Legacy: specify "Joplin's" Tag: Visual edit
- 06:1106:11, 17 April 2024 diff hist +95 Ragtime →Historical context: This sentence needed a little more explanation, so introducing it with "Outside of live performances by professional pianists, ..." Tag: Visual edit
- 05:5405:54, 17 April 2024 diff hist +63 Ragtime →Origins: Correct grammar: "pianists" needs to be plural. Also grammar: "improvisation" needs to be "improvised" to match form "played". Shorten wording for same amount of information as just: "Most of the early ragtime pianists could not read or notate music." Uncapitalized "Ragtime", "Brothels", "Bars", and "Salons" cause those are common nouns. Also grammar: "gatherings" should be plural. Added some hyperlinks. Tag: Visual edit
- 04:0104:01, 17 April 2024 diff hist +1,843 Talk:Scott Joplin →Edits: Reply Tag: Reply