Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Assessment/List of coastal defense ships of Germany

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Article promoted Hawkeye7 (talk) 12:25, 8 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

List of coastal defense ships of Germany[edit]

Nominator(s): Parsecboy (talk)

Another list of German warships - this one covers the coastal defense ships built by Germany in the 1880s-90s, and completes this topic (which means the list will go to FLC sooner or later). Thanks in advance to all who take the time to review the list. Parsecboy (talk) 18:52, 10 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Support ~~Comments~~

Add a hyphen to mid 1880s.
- Done
Tell the reader what position Bismarck held in the lede.
- Done
Perhaps "ran aground and scrapped" might be better for Hildebrand than just plain sunk.
- Sounds fine to me
Just a suggestion, you could consolidate common refs in the column header rather than each individual cell.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:34, 15 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"after the end of the war and subsequently disposed": after the war and subsequently disposed of
Support on prose per new standard disclaimer. - Dank (push to talk) 01:39, 17 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Ending a sentence with a preposition? Do my eyes deceive me? How about "subsequently discarded"?Parsecboy (talk) 16:17, 2 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  - That's fine. - Dank (push to talk) 17:30, 2 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Support: I had a read through this a couple of times and couldn't find much to fault except a typo that I fixed myself. Image licencing and references looked fine to me. Looks good to go in my opinion. Well done. Regards, AustralianRupert (talk) 23:00, 6 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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