Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 November 24

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How do I make the info box to reflect that he is deceased and also in the main article, it seems it still has his age at 75 but he died at 74? Also I would like help on the finishing touches of this article to ensure it stays in the main wiki site.

Firstinduty (talk) 01:48, 24 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I suggest you place (September 26, 1936 - November 26, 2010) in the lead section. What a pro. (talk) 10:25, 25 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hi All, I just want a second opinion on the article Uniblue It currently has an advert Tag on it, I followed the instructions and Wikified,/ toned it down, removed inappropriate links... etc. Can you take a look at it and remove the advert tag if you think it is ok? If there are issues with it , i will be more than happy to edit it again but i'd appreciate pointers (if any) on whats wrong. Thank you!

Keithmonti (talk) 15:23, 24 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Need feedback on this new article Circball, particularly whether it should be a stand-alone article or whether it should be merge with other content specifically contents that talks about "Variations of Basketball." Thanks!

Circball (talk) 00:15, 25 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]