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Ben Voss --feedback requested[edit]

Hi, this is my first article on "Ben Voss" please feed back.

THanks

Bradqwood (talk) 13:19, 12 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

It will need to be slightly more neutral and to have more references and sources which prove both the notability or importance of the subject to an encyclopedia and the information's accuracy. Good job though! ~ QwerpQwertus ·_Contact Me_·_Talkback Me_· 16:30, 12 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The infobox and photos are good, but QwerpQwertus makes a good comment. Chevy monte carlo 17:10, 12 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Paul Legrand[edit]

May I have some feedback on the new article Paul Legrand? Thank you. Beebuk 23:12, 12 June 2010 (UTC) —Preceding unsigned comment added by Beebuk (talk • contribs)

Very nice. I removed the unreviewed tag. I'm nervous about the long quotes—I'm almost certain that the books are beyond copyright, but what I don't know about copyright could fill a book. I'll ask at WP:MCQ. BTW, you should work on drafts in a user subpage, not your user page. If you don't know how to make one, let me know and I'll show you.--SPhilbrick T 01:57, 13 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]