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http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jevertoh/Enter_your_new_article_name_here. Just starting out on wikipedia[edit]

I would like any sort of feedback on this article and the references, as well as how to change the article name.  Thank you.


~~Jevertoh (talk) 00:48, 28 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

You should check that all of it is neutral and has a factual an disinterested tone, also, you should add more references from news, tv, big websites, ect. to prove the subject's notability and the accuracy of the article. I renamed (moved) the page for you, but for future reference, you can click the drop down menu next to the search box and click Move Page, or, to move this page again, you can follow this link. Good job though! ~ QwerpQwertus · Contact Me  · 04:49, 28 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I Am (2010 film)[edit]

This is a relatively new film that is being distributed by Fox on DVD this Fall. Promotions have just begun, so there are no real reviews or other articles to use as sources at this point. Thanks for taking the time to peruse the page!


~~Stefanhajek (talk) 01:17, 28 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, keep searching for reliable references to add to the article, if you can. Chevymontecarlo - alt 07:29, 31 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Green_Tomato_Ltd.[edit]


~~AllisonGarden (talk) 05:37, 28 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Green Tomato Ltd. -Reconsider! 07:29, 28 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Where is the article? None of the links lead anywhere. Chevymontecarlo - alt 07:30, 31 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Whipped_Unto_the_Third_Generation[edit]

Please review my new article, "Whipped Unto the Third Generation". Thanks.


~~Theriddle6488 (talk) 12:08, 28 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Nice; consider adding names to the references that are already there and try adding more. You can add names to references like this:
Example sentence <ref>[http://www.example.com/article/264|Example article reference name goes here!]</ref>.

Hope this helps. Chevymontecarlo - alt 07:32, 31 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bcourter/SpaceClaim[edit]

Please let me know if this article is now in an acceptable form for posting on wikipedia.

~~Bsharbaugh (talk) 13:23, 28 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Nice; yeah, I think the article's okay. Chevymontecarlo - alt 07:38, 31 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Keithamato/Principles_of_the_Well_Managed_Bank[edit]

I would like to ask for your feedback on this article. Thank you for your time.


~~Keithamato (talk) 15:29, 28 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Camlucke/Citizens_Project[edit]

Any help would be appreciated. I can't get the logo to work properly..

~~Camlucke (talk) 16:24, 28 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

As to the image, consider asking at the Wikipedia IRC help channel, where there are people who will be happy to help you with stuff like that. The article is good, but consider adding names to the references, like this:
Example sentence <ref>[http://www.example.com|Example article reference name goes here!]</ref>.

Hope this helps. Chevymontecarlo - alt 07:36, 31 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Amanda_Luv[edit]

I would like to have this reviewed for approval on Wikipedia. Thank you.


~~Gaybc69 (talk) 16:47, 28 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry, the article appears to have been deleted since. Chevymontecarlo - alt 07:33, 31 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jonathanlevey/Harris_levey[edit]

Is this draft article on Harris Levey ready to go live? If so, how to I move it to the live mode on Wikipedia. Even if it is ready to go live, I welcome further constructive input and suggestions. Please advise. Jonathan Levey 16:47, 28 July 2010 (UTC)


~~Jonathan Levey 16:47, 28 July 2010 (UTC)

User:Jwhamilt/Air and Space Basic Course[edit]

I created an article on the U.S. Air Force's Air and Space Basic Course, a required Professional Military Education course for junior officers.

[31 Jul 10 Update: Since I didn't receive any feedback over the last three days, I went ahead and moved the page to the commons. Please review and remove "new page" template. Cheers-]

~~Jwhamilt (talk) 17:47, 28 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jonathanlevey/Harris_levey[edit]

PianoTech, I need to know if you think I shoul dchange the title of this article to "Lee Harris" (Comic Book Illustrator, DC Comics

If so, I woudl like your help to make this change and give you permissionto do so. As mentioned in previous notes to you,my da's name at birth was "Harris Levy", but he changed it legally to "Lee Harris" during his time at DC Comics which is the name he used to sign his comic book illustrations with, and the name he seems to be most noted for publicly. e changed his name over to "Harris Levey" (adding the second "e" into this last name) after marriage, and was known by this name during his many yers in teh Advertising field where he worked on big ad camipagins like "The Army" and Clairol". But this naem did nto seem to become as widely known as when he used Lee ahrris for the comics. Please advise and make necesary changes. Also, I beleiv eI woudl be ready to "go live" soon with this article one the porper title is determined. What do yo think... is it ready? Jonathan Levey 19:49, 28 July 2010 (UTC)

~~Jonathan Levey 19:49, 28 July 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ask_larsson[edit]

Hi, I would like to contribute with articles about sports clubs in my area. This one is a translation from a Norwegian article (http://no.wikipedia.org/wiki/%C3%85s_tennisklubb) Please let me know if I´m heading in the right direction, and also indicate what you feel is lacking. Thanks a lot.


~~Ask larsson (talk) 23:51, 28 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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