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Self-aligned gate

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I've listed this article for peer review because I am trying to have it achieve the status of "good article".

Thanks, Blewis87 (talk) 19:56, 17 April 2008 (UTC)

Comments from The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)

• Expand the lead a little - see WP:LEAD for guidance.
• What's a MOSFET? Explain it a little before just using the acronym. The article needs to appeal to non-experts.
• Avoid spaces before citations per WP:CITE.
• Headings need to comply with WP:HEAD so See Also should be See also.
• Image caption "A Standard MOSFET" - standard doesn't need capitalising. Also, what relevance does this image have to the article? It's not clear to me.
• "seventies" 1970s.
• "The gate regions would sometimes fail to overlap the source and drain. This results in a non-working MOSFET" merge these sentences.
• "Innovations that made Self-Aligned Gate Technology possible" doesn't need to be bold and is overcapitalised.
• "Without these innovations, self-aligned gates would not have been possible." that's already pretty clear from the introduction to this part of the article.
• History section needs further citation and some work on the prose. Right now it's just a load of patent numbers, dates, authors, and article titles.
• "The importance of self-aligned gates comes in the process used to make them." what does this mean?
• Avoid lists of process steps - try writing out as prose.
• Number ranges use en-dash, not hyphen, to separate, per WP:DASH.
• See also section should be bullet pointed.
• Clean room image is used and mentioned in the caption but not in the article.

That's a start for you. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:13, 20 April 2008 (UTC)