Wikipedia:Peer review/Press Gang/archive1

Press Gang[edit]

Hi all. I've practically written all of this in its current state and would like to submit it for GA. I'd appreciate your suggestions for what could improve the article (including beyond GA). I don't always find vague comments like "some phrases are poorly constructed" helpful... if you have copyediting skills I'd find it much more helpful if you could correct such errors. The JPS ^{talk to me} 15:17, 7 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I notice two of the three images don't have fair use rationales. Make sure to add those. ShadowHalo 13:27, 19 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Bloody hell, very surprised at myself for missing those! Thanks for pointing it out -- now corrected. The JPS ^{talk to me} 15:37, 19 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]