Wikipedia:Peer review/List of family relations in the National Hockey League/archive1
List of family relations in the National Hockey League[edit]
This page has gone through a massive overhaul (see here). My obvious concern is the length of the article. The page is massive, not only in length, but in the size of the article itself. I note that other featured lists are of comparable length (see List of Georgia Institute of Technology alumni, which is 97kb). I also know that the "Trivia" section could be renamed or altered somewhat. The facts and information in it are definitely worth of keeping in the article; I simply ask someone with more prose ability than me to make it more appealing. Another concern of mine is the width of the page. The table begins to look very squished and the pictures overrun the right-hand margin at 1024x768, and it looks just plain ugly at 800x600 (though who still operates at that resolution, I don't know... mine looks fine at 1600x1200). My wiki-fu is not as strong as others, so if you can please make some cosmetic improvements it would be greatly appreciated. I know this can eventually make featured list (it definitely won't fail for lack of citations, that's for sure), it just needs that little extra to put it over the top. Thanks, and I look forward to your comments. Anthony Hit me up... 11:18, 28 April 2007 (UTC)