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George Town, Penang

Previous peer review

I've listed this article for peer review because I've substantially rewritten the article & improved citations, selecting only government statistics, academic literature, economic studies, news sites and other official sources. This might be good enough for GA, but I'm keen to explore the possibility of further elevating George Town to FA status. Appreciate your kind assistance.

Thanks, hundenvonPG (talk) 01:40, 1 January 2024 (UTC)

Comments from Z1720

Comments after a quick skim:

• Suggest bringing this article to WP:GAN first before thinking about FAC
• "This was the only naval battle that took place in Malayan territory during the war." Needs a citation
• "Poverty and wanton Japanese brutality towards the local population also forced women into sexual slavery." Needs a citation.
• "This made George Town the first city within the Malayan Federation, and by extension, Malaysia." Needs a citation.
• "The suburb of Balik Pulau is located at the western plains of the island." Needs a citation.
• "Although the committees were organised ad hoc and lacked regulatory power, these early measures marked the beginning of a systematic approach to municipal governance in Penang." Needs a citation
• "Prior to 2023, state elections had been conducted simultaneously with nationwide general elections every five years." Needs a citationo
• "Batu Lancang has the largest proportion of Chinese residents in any state constituency." Needs a citation
• "In the 2023 state elections, PH successfully retained 17 of George Town's state constituencies, with the far-right Perikatan Nasional (PN) opposition bloc seizing two of the Malay-majority seats at the western edge of the city." Needs a citation
• "Parliamentary constituencies" and "State constituencies" sections need a citation.
• "The 24.28-hectare (0.2428 km2) park being built on reclaimed land will be divided into four areas featuring a food and beverage (F&B) area, water gardens, a man-made beach and a coastal grove." Needs a citation.
• "The Penang Green Connector Project envisions ecological corridors that include 50 km (31 mi) of coastal parks and 65 km (40 mi) of riverine systems designated as "blue corridors", in addition to the construction of pedestrian and cycling paths in the city." Needs a citation.
• "The newspaper focuses on current issues and policymaking within the state." Needs a citation, or perhaps it can be removed.
• "Additionally, George Town was featured as a pit-stop in The Amazing Race 16, The Amazing Race Asia 4 and The Amazing Race Asia 5." Needs a citation.
• "Rapid urbanisation throughout the 20th century led to a gradual expansion of the city's road network." Needs a citation.
• Each person in the "Notable people" section needs a citation.
• Per WP:FORBESCON, ref 155 "John, Wasik" is not considered a reliable source.
• Ref 265, 281, 286, 298, 300, 307: per MOS:ALLCAPS do not have the source name in all caps.
• "Suet Leng Khoo;" is currently not being used as an inline citation.
• Suggest archiving the sources using IA Bot

Hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 00:15, 6 January 2024 (UTC)

Thanks for the comments @Z1720:! I've rectified the article based on above. Feel free to add on too should there be more improvements to be made. hundenvonPG (talk) 07:28, 7 January 2024 (UTC)