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College (1927 film)[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because this is my first submission of a movie plot and I would like feedback on how to improve future submissions.

Thanks, Mrtuttle (talk) 19:26, 16 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

It is written like a teaser, and should be more factually stated. Do not worry about giving spoilers. Also, Peer Review is "intended for high-quality articles that have already undergone extensive work", not individual sections. If you need further help don't hesitate to ask me or someone at the Village Pump/Assistance. ALTON .ıl 04:08, 18 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]