Wikipedia:Peer review/Alsace/archive1

Alsace

This is a featured article at fr: and I've translated the rest of the text that wasn't in en: to here. I appreciate the French wikipedians standards of an FA are different, but if anyone has any comments or suggestions I'll try my best to implement them. Craigy (talk) 07:48, Jun 26, 2005 (UTC)

Good work, but it does need some changes. The lead needs to be longer, at least two or three paragraphs. There are also seem to be three overly short sections: economy, demographics, and politics. The French version has a much longer Economy section so that one could be solved by simply doing some more translation. The other two do not seem to exist in the French version and these should either be expanded so they can stand on their own or merged into other sections. - SimonP 15:14, Jun 26, 2005 (UTC)

Looks good. The only real problem I spotted with getting this article to FA status is a lack of cited references. As you pulled material from the French Wikipedia, it needs to be cited. Some other references for that parts you did not pull, and to supplement the information you did pull, would also help this article reach Featured status. --Allen3 ^talk 21:26, Jun 26, 2005 (UTC)

Just take it to the featured article candidates! --Deryck C. 2005-06-30 15:50:27 (UTC)