Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of awards and nominations received by Rooney Mara/archive1
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List of awards and nominations received by Rooney Mara[edit]
List of awards and nominations received by Rooney Mara (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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- Nominator(s): Lisbeth Sjöberg (talk) 08:44, 1 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I am nominating this for featured list because I believe it fits the criteria. I have used other accolades lists as references for this article and I have made sure this uses reliable sources. I look forward to the comments. Lisbeth Sjöberg (talk) 08:44, 1 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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- "She received several awards and nominations for her performance, including the Academy Award for Best Actress...." - I would clarify which of the named awards she actually won, because I read this and at first thought "funny, I don't remember her winning an Oscar?"
- "in the biographical drama Mary Magdalene (2018),[3] garnered" - don't think that comma there is needed
- For ensemble cast awards, you need to add a footnote indicating with who she shared the award, or at the very least put "shared with the cast" or similar, because currently it looks like she was the sole recipient
- "(tied with Saoirse Ronan for Hanna)" - why "tied" rather than "shared" as you do with all other joint wins?
- Link Daniel Craig both times he is mentioned, given that the table is sortable
- Think that's it from me :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:09, 2 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @ChrisTheDude: Thanks for your comment. I fixed all the issues and have edited the article. About number four, I used "tied" for those awards she won or nominated with someone for different films (like your example), and "shared" for similar ones. Lisbeth Sjöberg (talk) 15:06, 2 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- That makes sense. Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 18:53, 2 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from RunningTiger123 (talk) 22:02, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply] |
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Support – RunningTiger123 (talk) 22:02, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
- The opening sentence is jarringly short and the lead in general is a little brief, perhaps describe her first role, when it was etc before going on to say when she won her first nom/award.
- She seems to have received attention for The Social Network so that could go in the lead too.
- "and went on to..." one run-on too many for me and not sure this even works grammatically but the sentence is so long it's hard to follow.
- For balance, and also for those who aren't aware of it, the Golden Raspberry nom should be explained as well.
- I spot-checked ref 6 and couldn't see any sign of the nominations which the list suggests are referenced there.
- Also, because I know nothing about it, I checked the Silver Medallion from Telluride, and the reference doesn't seem to mention Silver or medallion at all.
- Ref 19 just seems to redirect to a homepage.
- I haven't really looked at the other refs, but 0/3 doesn't appear great.
- Link publishers/works in references consistently, e.g. what's the approach? First time only? Every time?
That's all for a quick run through. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 09:34, 1 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @The Rambling Man: Hi! All done. I linked publishers/works in references only for the first time. Lisbeth Sjöberg (talk) 20:30, 3 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Cool. Avoid the SHOUTING in the ref and I think we're nearly there. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 20:32, 3 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @The Rambling Man: "SHOUTING in the ref"? Lisbeth Sjöberg (talk) 21:21, 3 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- THE CAPITAL LETTERS. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 21:22, 3 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @The Rambling Man: I think you meant ref 45, I fixed that. Lisbeth Sjöberg (talk) 22:09, 3 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- THE CAPITAL LETTERS. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 21:22, 3 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @The Rambling Man: "SHOUTING in the ref"? Lisbeth Sjöberg (talk) 21:21, 3 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Cool. Avoid the SHOUTING in the ref and I think we're nearly there. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 20:32, 3 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Support my concerns addressed, cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 07:42, 4 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed, promoting. --PresN 03:47, 20 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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