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Bob Dylan[edit]

Article is still a featured article.

I am not sure whether this article was ever properly added to the list of featured articles; it was added at a point when the designation process was in transition, and I can't tell whether the appropriate consensus was ever reached. The record is very messy (at least to this user).

In any event, after it was designated an FA, the article was slowly but steadily rewritten, and very little of the original substance remained this spring. At that point, I was tangled up in a nasty edit war over revisions I'd made; the opposing editor argued mainly that the FA tag should itself bar the sort of revisions I'd made. That's a simplification, of course; if you enjoy wading through invective, you can read the talk page for details. The dispute was never really resolved by consensus; instead, after his position gained virtually no immediate support, the opposing editor withdrew.

Since that time, there's been very little substantive editing on the page. I've continued to clean out inappropriate material -- laundry lists of greatest songs, comments about ignored masterpieces, etc. But the article needs more work and more contributors, and I think the FA tag is inhibiting revisions (not to mention the effect of the nasty edit war). Besides, I've now written the bulk of the substantive text as it stands, and if I don't think it's good enough, you shouldn't either. [Insert emoticon to indicate that last line is spoken in sort of a Foghorn Leghorn voice.]

Formally: the article does not meet criterion one, as it is far from the best work available. Compare it to featured articles on other great American musicians, like the FA on Miles Davis. It does not meet criterion two, since it is not comprehensive. While I think my revisions to the early sections of the article strike a reasonable balance between the comprehensive and the concise, the later sections, from the beginning of Dylan's "gospel period" on, are sketchy, haphazard, and leave large gaps in their depiction of Dylan's career.

Monicasdude 18:31, 15 July 2005 (UTC)[reply]

  • Speedy Remove it has never even been through the proper FAC process!!!Borisblue 04:17, 16 July 2005 (UTC)[reply]
  • Remove. Ok I've had my breather. But don't worry, I won't be around much at all and I won't be touching this article. In reality, Bob Dylan went through a completely normal, well-attended FAC process and passed, deservedly (props GWO, wherever you are), by a wide margin. Monicasdude insists that version was substandard and compared unfavorably to articles like Miles Davis and Louis Armstrong. In this he's basically a monovoice, but his dogged devotion to his own (mis)judgments leaves all others by the wayside. I vote for Remove now because he has eviscerated the article beyond recognition. It is now a turgid emotionless read and only the appearance of an equally dogged antimonicasdude could bring it back toward FA quality. If such a being exists please step it up and go. If nothing else it will be a funny scene. JDG 20:56, 18 July 2005 (UTC)[reply]
  • Remove. While the edit war is unfortunate, the bigger problem is the article is entirely full of editorial opinion, with no use of sources and no citation that I could see. Throughout the article there are comments to the effect of his play is improving, his greatest song, etc. 50% of the article is opinion about the guy or his works and the rest is facts with no sources to back them up. - Taxman Talk 13:12, July 19, 2005 (UTC)
While I agree with your ultimate verdict I couldn't disagree more with your reasons for it. Trying to make 'Arts and Entertainment' topics as dry and factual as Sci/Tech articles is just wrongheaded, and you confuse statements about the listening public's POV with the writer's own POV (as does Monicasdude to an egregious extent). But yes, sources should be cited far more, both inline and in References. It won't happen while MDude is the lead editor since he impresses himself as an unimpeachable source. JDG 17:49, 20 July 2005 (UTC)[reply]
  • Speedy Remove, no proof it ever gone through FAC. Hedley 22:45, 22 July 2005 (UTC)[reply]
  • Retain I have no personal axe to grind since my contributions to this article are very minor. But I think it's a good account of a compex career - which can still be improved upon. I just read the FA on Miles Davis as a comparison and while the Davis article is good, I don't think it's on a much higher critical plane. Mick gold 18:11, 24 July 2005 (UTC)[reply]
  • Remove unless details of FA process are found (and clearly linked from Talk:Bob Dylan), and unless a clear "References" section is added. -- Creidieki 02:24, 1 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]
  • Retain it's a good article and there are plans to return the article to the form it was in when it was added in the first place, also how could the articl have been added with out the proper steps taken? (penguinsforever, August 10, 2005)
  • Retain - It is a long article, very detailed, seems to be very factually accurate. removing an article from featured because it was nominated under a different system than the current policy is ...stupid. SECProto 14:53, August 11, 2005 (UTC)
  • Retain I've also made only recent and very small contributions to this article. But overall, it seems pretty comprehensive and well written. There seems to be some unnecessary rancor between Monicasdude and JDG over the edit history; but none of the changes have seemed particularly unreasonable. Lulu of the Lotus-Eaters 19:20, 2005 August 12 (UTC)
  • Retain the article is still very good and comprehensive(spelling?). Besides, Dylan kicks ass.
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