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GG Allin[edit]

Well written article with good facts and plenty of information. A true testament as to how Wikipedia articles should be written. It's also come a long way. Gold Stur 01:43, 9 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]

  • Oppose a good article but the lead isn't long enough(See:Wikipedia:Lead) and there are no references. Falphin 01:54, 9 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]
  • Object.
    • Image:Gg47.jpg lacks fair-use rationale.
    • Image:GGALLIN.jpg lacks any copyright information and is currently at-risk of deletion.
    • The lead is too short.
    • The writing features far too many "(see below)", or "(see this link)" parentheticals. In many cases the links could be worked easily into the prose.
    • Statements like "Tensions within The Jabbers began to swell as GG became increasingly uncontrollable, vicious, and uncompromising" need some according-to-who attribution.
    • In general the writing feels narrative rather than encyclopedic.
—Bunchofgrapes (talk) 04:18, 9 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]
  • Object per above objections. In addition, this article is desperate for incline citations and a good copyedit. Certainly a very nice start to the article! *Exeunt* Ganymead Dialogue? 15:00, 10 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]
  • Object as per Bunchofgrapes and Ganymead. Saravask 22:58, 14 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]
  • Object a truely impressive improvment from where it was when I first saw it but its not quite to featured status. Dalf | Talk 07:20, 15 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]
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