Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Battle for Henderson Field

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The article was promoted 14:14, 17 September 2007.

Battle for Henderson Field[edit]

Respectfully submit this article for FAC review. The article has been through a peer review [1] and A class review [2] with WP:MILHIST. Cla68 23:46, 8 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Support another great article on this campaign which fully meets the FA criteria. --Nick Dowling 04:19, 9 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Support. Another excellent article by Cla68 on the Pacific War. Kyriakos 09:54, 10 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Comment These minor fixes needed: Support

"October 23–October 26" - spaces needed around the dash
En dashes are used in page ranges in the footnotes.
"all of the Marine machine gunners" – the "of" is redundant. Epbr123 20:14, 10 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I'll fix them. The en dashes may take awhile but I'll post here when it's completed. Cla68 20:23, 10 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

You can ask Brighterorange (talk · contribs) to run his dash fixing script; he's testing it still, and it doesn't catch everything, but it will shorten your workload. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 00:45, 13 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I believe all the corrections have now been made. Cla68 01:42, 14 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Comments, no punctuation at end of sentence fragments on image captions, see WP:MOS#Captions. Reflist automatically smalls the ref; I removed the double small because I couldn't read the refs. Looks beautiful, as always. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 00:49, 13 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I removed the punctuation from the image captions with sentence fragments. I appreciate your help and constructive comments. Cla68 01:42, 14 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Support, another fine job. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 02:22, 14 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Support. Well-done as usual.--Yannismarou 14:00, 15 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Support. Well-done as usual.-Rlevse 21:04, 15 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.