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The result was keep. Eddie891 Talk Work 14:22, 23 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Irene M. Zoppi[edit]

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Subject does not appear to meet WP:ANYBIO or WP:PROF. My WP:BEFORE didn't yield significant coverage in independent and reliable sources... primary sources (leanin), employer ([1],[2],[3],[4]), student newspaper (AACC). This Hispanic Lifestyle article appears to mostly copy the Army articles: ([5]). TJMSmith (talk) 05:14, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Note: This discussion has been included in the list of Academics and educators-related deletion discussions. TJMSmith (talk) 05:15, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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  • Delete?. Subject appears to be a very worthy person but I can't see notability under Wikipedia policies. Bloated BLP looks as it was written by a PR team. Xxanthippe (talk) 08:55, 16 March 2021 (UTC).[reply]
  • DeleteWeak Keep On a first look this appears to be a well-sourced page, but as the nom has shown it lacks SIGCOV in multiple independent RS necessary to satisfy WP:GNG or any other notability guideline. Mztourist (talk) 08:57, 16 March 2021 (UTC) I have revised my !vote based on improvements made to this page, but still regard it as being of tenuous notability - another weakly sourced "first Puerto Rican to do/be something" Mztourist (talk) 10:26, 17 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Delete As per all, lacks SIGCOV. Setreis (talk) 14:08, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • DeleteNeutral to Weak Keep With disclosure: I did some very minimal cleanup work on wording in parts of this article not too long back and noticed the issues with the sources. As it stands it lacks RS coverage, and my initial search didn't turn up anything additional. Intothatdarkness 14:56, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Keep - I'm sure that with a little research RS's could be found. The fact that she is a general makes her notable.Tony the Marine (talk) 18:53, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
How? The only essay which supported the assertion that being a general makes one notable, WP:SOLDIER, was just deprecated by the Milhist Project. -Indy beetle (talk) 04:35, 17 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Weak keep Keep. Most of this is badly-sourced fluff but I think as the first Puerto Rican reserve general there is a kernel of notability here, and enough sourcing to support WP:GNG notability for that kernel. I've cut down some of the worst of the bad sourcing but this still needs more careful attention to remove claims that are not in the sources and sources that are not relevant for their claims (I removed some but I'm sure there is more), remove the insignificant trivia from her career record, and sort out which of the claims of civilian positions should be listed as past tense (for which years) and which as present. However none of these issues is a reason for deletion; WP:DINC. —David Eppstein (talk) 20:29, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
    • David Eppstein, I was thinking maybe a redirect to Puerto Rican women in the military could be useful to readers if there isn't SIGCOV. I'm surprised that there isn't more out there on her. I came across coverage of other women generals in the Army Reserve (i.e. [6]) but nothing like that on Zoppi. TJMSmith (talk) 21:11, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Comment I just corrected a line in the lede. It was misquoting a source. And as far as RS I did the usual sweep using the google links provided. There's some stuff related to her graduate work, but sadly I didn't find much in the way of RS. Intothatdarkness 20:44, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I think the Sauret piece (we use the one directly published by the Army, but there are several other versions in other reliable publications) and the congratulations from the Puerto Rican government, are both in-depth, reliable, and independent enough to count. The Hispanic Lifestyle piece is in-depth and independent but more dubious in its reliability; it reads more like publicity than journalism to me. The 2019 and 2020 sources are more local and less in-depth about Zoppi, so they don't count for as much, but they at least look reliable and broaden the coverage of her. —David Eppstein (talk) 21:19, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
PS The new El Tiempo Latino source found by TJMSmith also looks in-depth, reliable, and independent. And since it's from 2014, it isn't just a copy of the 2017 first-Puerto-Rican-general announcements. —David Eppstein (talk) 04:26, 17 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment: The page could use a few more corrections. Under the section "Operation Desert Storm", the second paragraph misattributes a series of leadership positions as having been during her active military service when all of those positions happened later during her rising career in the reserves. I'd recommend combining the "Operation Desert Storm" section and the "Army reserve" section into one section titled "Military service", and let it run chronologically to fix that. As a side note, this article also refers to the National Intelligence University as being under the National Security Agency, but that is incorrect. The NIU started as the Defense Intelligence School under the Defense Intelligence Agency, then it became the Defense Intelligence College, and then the National Intelligence University, but it has never been under the NSA. Regards, AzureCitizen (talk) 21:44, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
    • The corrected version of the NIU story appears to be that the NIU operates an educational facility ("academic center") within the NSA, and that Zoppi directs or has directed that center. —David Eppstein (talk) 22:15, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment: Eppstein made many improvements. I also found and incorporated into the article 4 sources: [7][8][9][10]. IMHO, these plus the release ([11]) from the PR Govt demonstrates significant and sustained coverage. Some of the sources predate her latest 2017 promotion. Pinging @Intothatdarkness:@Xxanthippe:@Setreis:@Mztourist: so you can reconsider your vote based on the newly uncovered sources. I'm glad to support keeping this article. TJMSmith (talk) 03:28, 17 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment The most I would do is switch to Neutral or perhaps Weak Keep on the article. It still needs work, although it's good to see what @David Eppstein: and @TJMSmith: have done so far. I'm in the middle of cleaning up another article like this that was kept and then abandoned. Lots of heavy lifting that should have been done (IMO) when the article was created. Intothatdarkness 14:24, 17 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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