User talk:Shahn27
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For any edits on jasmonic acid: make sure you know your chemistry (or ask your teacher) and adhere to WP:SECONDARY. --Smokefoot (talk) 23:52, 23 March 2018 (UTC)
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When you're writing about medical topics, you need to make sure that you are in compliance with the sourcing requirements for medical articles. You also, as Smokefoot indicated above, need to rely on secondary sources, and make sure that you are using sources that actually support what you're using them to say. For example
Recent research has indicated that many secondary metabolites and plant hormones carry pharmacological properties. These secondary metabolites contain many functional groups that allow them to affect proteins (receptors, enzymes, etc.) and membranes. These phytochemical compounds can have dire effects on animal cellular components as they interact with each other. Scientists have been able to exploit these activities to develop drugs with many properties, such as anti-cancer and anti-inflammatory drugs.[1] For example, researchers have identified plant stress hormone that suppress cell proliferation and induce apoptosis in human cancer cells. [1][2][3][4]
References
- ^ a b Wadood, Abdul (2013). "Phytochemical Analysis of Medicinal Plants Occurring in Local Area of Mardan". Biochemistry & Analytical Biochemistry. 2.
- ^ "Log In - Biological Science Database - ProQuest". Retrieved 2018-03-23.
- ^ Fingrut, O; Flescher, E (2002/04). "Plant stress hormones suppress the proliferation and induce apoptosis in human cancer cells". Leukemia. 16 (4): 608–616. doi:10.1038/sj.leu.2402419. ISSN 1476-5551.
{{cite journal}}: Check date values in:|date=(help)- ^ Zhang, Meng; Zhang, Michael W; Zhang, Lili; Zhang, Lingrui (2015-07-24). "Methyl jasmonate and its potential in cancer therapy". Plant Signaling & Behavior. 10 (9). doi:10.1080/15592324.2015.1062199. ISSN 1559-2316. PMC 4883903. PMID 26208889.
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- The first source sentences are supported by a paper entitled "Phytochemical Analysis of Medicinal Plants Occurring in Local Area of Mardan". The scope of this paper is medicinal plants around the town of Mardan, and even for that it's a primary source. While it contains a very brief literature review, it doesn't attempt to look at the literature in a systematic fashion.
- More importantly, most of the statements in those four sentences are not supported by this source. Using a source to support things it doesn't say is a significant issue. People may interpret that as an attempt to mislead.
- That source also doesn't support the final sentence.
- You shouldn't be reporting on preliminary findings. The Fingrut and Flescher paper paper is from 16 years ago - there's been more than enough time for people to look into this bioactivity in more depth. Has this panned out? If so, there's going to be a lot of much more recent literature.
- Your second reference is a link that goes through your university's proxy server. It isn't accessible to anyone outside your university. Please use DOIs instead of these kinds of links to generate references. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:42, 26 March 2018 (UTC)