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Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (March 8)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by CNMall41 was:

This appears to be a duplicate of another submission, Asthma + Lung UK, which is also waiting to be reviewed. To save time we will consider the other submission and not this one.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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CNMall41 (talk) 18:21, 8 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Rosebank95! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! CNMall41 (talk) 18:21, 8 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Asthma + Lung UK[edit]

There is already a draft for Asthma + Lung UK located at Draft:Asthma + Lung UK. It was declined and flagged for undisclosed paid editing per WP:PAID. If you are connected to the subject of the draft, or if you are affiliated in any way with the previous submitter, please make such disclosure. Also, please use the current draft for updates and submission so as not to break up any comments about the submission. --CNMall41 (talk) 18:23, 8 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

paid editing[edit]

As previously advised, your edits give the impression you have a financial stake in promoting a topic, but you have not complied with Wikipedia's mandatory paid editing disclosure requirements. You were asked to cease editing until you responded by either stating that you are not being directly or indirectly compensated for your edits, or by complying with the mandatory requirements under the Wikimedia Terms of Use that you disclose your employer, client and affiliation. Again, you can post such a disclosure on your user page at User:Rosebank95, and the template {{Paid}} can be used for this purpose – e.g. in the form: {{paid|user=Rosebank95|employer=InsertName|client=InsertName}}. Please respond before making any other edits to Wikipedia. Theroadislong (talk) 10:11, 24 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hi there, I don't have a financial declaration to make. I've made this page as I know the two charities (Asthma UK and the British Lung Foundation which already have Wikipedia pages) have now merged under a new name called Asthma + Lung UK - this is a charity in the United Kingdom, helping people who have a condition like asthma or COPD. Rosebank95 (talk) 13:33, 22 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Asthma + Lung UK (March 25)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Herpetogenesis was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please fix WP:PROMO, WP:IDPR, WP:IBA issues.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Asthma + Lung UK and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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HᴇʀᴘᴇᴛᴏGᴇɴᴇꜱɪꜱ (talk) 16:35, 25 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Asthma + Lung UK (May 13)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Chetsford was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Note to future reviewers: at least one of the sources here appears to be deceptively labeled as "BBC News" but is actually the organization's own website.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Asthma + Lung UK and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Asthma + Lung UK, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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Chetsford (talk) 13:49, 13 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Asthma + Lung UK (June 10)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by 0xDeadbeef was:

You changed the deceptive BBC News website name back to the correct name, this means that the previous declines about notability would still stand unless you add more reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject. Please do not submit again until you have added more reliable sources, or it could be rejected.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Asthma + Lung UK and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Asthma + Lung UK, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

0xDeadbeef 09:44, 10 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding User:Rosebank95/sandbox[edit]

Hello, Rosebank95. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that User:Rosebank95/sandbox, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 19:02, 8 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, User:Rosebank95/sandbox[edit]

Hello, Rosebank95. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or draft page you started, "sandbox".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! Hey man im josh (talk) 18:27, 8 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]