Template:Did you know nominations/Rathika Ramasamy

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The result was: promoted by Montanabw^(talk) 01:36, 24 May 2016 (UTC)

Rathika Ramasamy[edit]

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Red-wattled lapwing (Vanellus indicus)

... that Rathika Ramasamy's photo collection of birds (one pictured) were published in 2009 in ‘Uccelli in Natura’, an Italian bird magazine, and she was called the best bird photographer from Asia?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Al-Atrash

Created by Nvvchar (talk). Self-nominated at 09:09, 5 May 2016 (UTC).

The article is new: Y
The article is long enough: Y
The hook is interesting: Y
Please put the source at the end of the hook in the text.
The hook is below 200 characters: Y
Copyvio detector does not reveal any copyright violation: Y
QPQ: Y
Copy right of picture: Y

Saff V. (talk) 12:47, 7 May 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for the review. Ref fixed at the end of the hook text in the article.Nvvchar. 15:19, 7 May 2016 (UTC)

@Nvvchar: The fourth source is self-publish. Please replace with another source.Saff V. (talk) 06:03, 8 May 2016 (UTC)

Saff V. Yes, I have deleted the book self-publish reference and added another ref to the text with slight modifications.Nvvchar. 12:43, 8 May 2016 (UTC)

@Nvvchar: The last issue I see here is orphan. Please link the article to other articles.Saff V. (talk) 04:19, 9 May 2016 (UTC)

Saff V. As there was no orphan hat tag I did not link it. I have now added "See also" section with List of Indian women artists which includes the name of Rathika Ramasamy.Nvvchar. 07:19, 9 May 2016 (UTC)

Thanks. Good to go.Saff V. (talk) 07:25, 9 May 2016 (UTC)

New reviewer needed, as the article has been reworked. Shortly after this was promoted to Prep, numerous edits on the article by more than one person completely removed the hook wording out of the article, and pretty much re-wrote the article. Nvvchar Please re-check the article and see if you can come up with another hook. I am very sorry this happened to your hook. — Maile (talk) 23:05, 17 May 2016 (UTC)

Maile66 Yes. I agree. Here is Alt1 hook ~~... that Rathika Ramasamy's wildlife photographs, in particular of birds (one pictured), were exhibited in September 2005 at the "Clean Ganga Campaign" held at the India International Centre?~~ Thanks.Nvvchar. 01:18, 18 May 2016 (UTC)

Saff V. Can you please consider reviewing the new hook?Nvvchar. 15:33, 18 May 2016 (UTC)

Given the extent of the rewrite, a full re-review will be necessary, not just of the proposed ALT1 hook. BlueMoonset (talk) 03:37, 20 May 2016 (UTC)

This article is new enough and long enough. The ALT1 hook facts are sourced inline, the image is appropriately licensed, the article is neutral and I detected no copyright issues. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:23, 21 May 2016 (UTC)

The inline cite for ALT1 says nothing about "in particular of birds". Yoninah (talk) 22:02, 21 May 2016 (UTC)hook with ALT

Yoninah Yes. I have now reworded the ALT1 hook with this ALT2 hook. I hope it is acceptable. Thanks.Nvvchar. 04:24, 22 May 2016 (UTC)

ALT2... that Rathika Ramasamy', wildlife photographer specialized in bird photography (one pictured), took part at the "Clean Ganga Campaign" held in September 2005 at the India International Centre?

Instead of introducing more errors into the hook, I suggest we go with ALT1a

ALT1a ... that Rathika Ramasamy's wildlife photographs (example pictured) were exhibited in September 2005 at the "Clean Ganga Campaign" held at the India International Centre? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:03, 22 May 2016 (UTC)

Good idea, @Cwmhiraeth:. ALT1a hook ref verified and cited inline. Image is freely licensed. ALT1a good to go. Yoninah (talk) 10:22, 22 May 2016 (UTC)