Template:Did you know nominations/Marla Berkowitz

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:12, 4 November 2020 (UTC)

Marla Berkowitz

  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Beth Langston
  • Comment: I tried to provide an alt that would go into more explanation of ASL interpreting at a televised press conference but it was just so long and awkward; maybe this would work for the quirky? Hm, and the DYK helper is insisting I end this with a ?, but there's already one inside the quote. Do we really want two?
  • It does look a bit odd with two question marks. The issue could be avoided by substituting something like: ... people would ask why she was "making those big facial expressions"? MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 20:10, 26 October 2020 (UTC)

Created by Valereee (talk). Self-nominated at 13:54, 23 October 2020 (UTC).

Interesting woman, on good sources, no copyvio obvious. - Sorry, wherever the question mark, I don't care about a hook that is quirky but nothing else. I think you could just use the lead sentence, even spelling out American Sign Language, no? Try it, and we can work on it together. If I word it I can't review it. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:42, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
Gerda Arendt, would this work?
ALT1: ... that Marla Berkowitz knew some people would wonder why she made exaggerated facial expressions during her American Sign Language interpretations of COVID-19 press conferences?
ALT2: ... that Marla Berkowitz considers herself a Sumain, a coined term meaning people who communicate with each other using their hands?
ALT2a: ... that Marla Berkowitz considers herself a Sumain?
I'd have to add Sumain into Deaf culture, where it redirects, but that ought to be done anyway. —valereee (talk) 12:26, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
Thank you, valereee! ALT1 doesn't work for me because it takes too long until we arrive at the explanation, and some - I'm afraid - will turn away not curious about that exaggeration. (Language question: "make ... facial expressions" sounds strange to me, - perhaps just me?) If we turn it around, there's no surprise. Another COVID-19? Really? - ALT2 is acceptable, but I'm not the strongest supporter of having to explain a term in a hook, nor of what a subject says about herself. Good though if you want to promote the term. I'd just say, as the lead does: "... that Marla Berkowitz, the only ASL Certified Deaf Interpreter in Ohio, became known for interpreting the governor's daily press conferences on television? What do you think? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:08, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
Gerda Arendt, we could get rid of the term explanation, maybe...let me see if it's possible to create the article Sumain, which currently is a redirect. I don't love using the first sentence, as Certified Deaf Interpreter isn't even a redirect, is barely mentioned at the most likely redirect, Registry of Interpreters for the Deaf, and doesn't seem to be notable enough. —valereee (talk) 15:13, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
Yeah, doesn't look like it. We appear to be, for now, stuck with Sumain being defined in various articles but not having an article of its own —valereee (talk) 15:25, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
interpreter for the deaf is self-explanatory, doesn't need an article --Gerda Arendt (talk) 18:42, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
Gerda Arendt, it's the Certified Deaf part. Berkowitz is herself Deaf. She's not the only ASL interpreter in Ohio, she's the only Certified Deaf one. It's a major distinction; it's the difference between someone whose native tongue is German and someone whose native tongue is French translating French to German. It's fine when we're discussing a menu, but you probably want a native German speaker when the nuances are really important. Berkowitz works with hearing interpreters, who interpret for her, and then she interprets for the Deaf.—valereee (talk) 19:17, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
You decide. Thanks for the nuance between deaf and Deaf. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 19:37, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
I added a shortened version. Let the promoter decide. :) —valereee (talk) 20:37, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
Here's in between:
ALT2b: ... that Marla Berkowitz considers herself a Sumain, meaning people who communicate using their hands?
all 3, but still have these reservations about subject considering herself. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:13, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
Thanks for the review, Gerda! Happy to continue to discuss any needed tweaks with you, promoters, whomever. —valereee (talk) 16:39, 28 October 2020 (UTC)