Template:Did you know nominations/Lola Maverick Lloyd

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The result was: by Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:15, 7 May 2013 (UTC).

Lola Maverick Lloyd[edit]

Lola Maverick Lloyd in 1915

Created by Teemu08 (talk). Self nominated at 15:55, 23 April 2013 (UTC).

detailed article on few but good sources. If you have more, you are welcome, but it's fine if not. I didn't get the idea "first attempt at a world government", perhaps pipe-link as in the article? Should it be "co-founded"? I would perhaps be even more interested in Women's International League for Peace and Freedom as early as 1915. - In the article, last sentence, I find "Lola's death" with just her first name a bit surprising, could be "her death", or a quote from someone who speaks of her by first name. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:27, 29 April 2013 (UTC)
Perhaps Teemu08 might find these useful:
— Maile (talk) 22:34, 29 April 2013 (UTC)
Thanks for the sources, Maile. When I get a chance, I will incorporate them into the article. I changed the last line of the death section and changed the blurb to co-founded. I appreciate the esoteric nature of setting up the first organization to create a world government, and would be fine if the blurb read something like "co-founded the Campaign for World Government." Teemu08 (talk) 19:08, 6 May 2013 (UTC)
  • you mean:
ALT1: ... that Lola Maverick Lloyd (pictured), the granddaughter of Samuel Maverick, co-founded the Campaign for World Government?
for both, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:37, 6 May 2013 (UTC)
Yes, that's fine by me. Teemu08 (talk) 01:07, 7 May 2013 (UTC)