Template:Did you know nominations/Linn Nhyo Taryar
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The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 16:49, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
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Linn Nhyo Taryar
- ... that the astrologer Linn Nhyo Taryar made astrological arrangement and yadaya for the downfall of the coup leader Min Aung Hlaing and arrested with rebellion of the state? Source: "Public calls for release of popular astrologer". The Myanmar Times. 14 February 2021.
"People are demanding peacefully in front of the police station for the release of the astrologer". 7Day News. 12 February 2021.
Created by Taung Tan (talk). Self-nominated at 04:41, 5 January 2022 (UTC).
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- "He was sentenced to 6 months in prison." and "He was arbitrarily sentenced to 2 years in prison by junta's court on 27 December 2021." both need referencing - Neutral:
- Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:
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Overall: 
A couple of unsourced points to be addressed. Also I think the hook needs rewording, I'm not sure people will understand what "made astrological arrangement and yadaya" means. "and arrested with rebellion of the state". I have come up with an alternative hook. EchetusXe 17:17, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
- ALT1 - ... that the astrologer Linn Nhyo Taryar was arrested after performing yadaya (magic rituals) against coup leader Min Aung Hlaing?
- I guess Taung Tan's busy with their studies at the moment. So I've searched some usable references for the above two sentences. But, unfortunately, I found no RS except a couple of sources in Burmese whose reliablities are quite controversial. (It's true that he was sentenced to 2 years but no popular media mentioned that. The news are full with Paing Takhon being sentenced into 3 yrs, which happened on the same day.) If you don't mind, EchetusXe and Taung Tan, I'd remove those twos so that the issues would have been addressed. Thanks. Htanaungg (talk) 15:00, 16 January 2022 (UTC)
