Template:Did you know nominations/Julia Gjika

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 15:16, 1 April 2015 (UTC)

Julia Gjika[edit]

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~~... that Julia Gjika was part of a group of women, nicknamed "military poets", who served in the Albanian military and wrote poems?~~

Reviewed: Jenny Twitchell Kempton donated by SusunW (talk) 01:11, 28 March 2015 (UTC)
Comment: for WHM

5x expanded by Big iron (talk), SusunW (talk), Rosiestep (talk). Nominated by Rosiestep (talk) at 01:09, 28 March 2015 (UTC).

Another interesting woman, well sourced. The hook looses after the interesting name of the group. Rather than duplicating, could you mention Albanian (language) somewhere? Perhaps mention the other woman also? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:47, 31 March 2015 (UTC)

ALT1: ~~... that Julia Gjika was part of the "military poets", including Iliriana Sulkuqi, who wrote poems in the Albanian language?~~ SusunW (talk) 13:06, 31 March 2015 (UTC)

Better! How about mentioning the award-winning of Iliriana? And getting Albanian in front? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:17, 31 March 2015 (UTC)

ALT2: ... that Julia Gjika, who writes poems in the Albanian language, was part of the "military poets", including the award-winning Iliriana Sulkuqi? SusunW (talk) 13:27, 31 March 2015 (UTC)

Fine, and sourced, or the other way round:

ALT3: ... that Julia Gjika and the award-winning Iliriana Sulkuqi wrote poems in Albanian as members of the group "military poets"?

--Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:53, 31 March 2015 (UTC)