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Jonny Pelham
- ... that the comedian Jonny Pelham used his stand-up set on Live at the Apollo to discuss his childhood sexual abuse? Source: https://www.bbc.com/news/entertainment-arts-60226744
- ALT1: ... that the comedian Jonny Pelham is one of only 200 people in the UK to suffer from popliteal pterygium syndrome? Source: https://list.co.uk/news/11619/jonny-pelham-before-and-after
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Mad honey
5x expanded by Launchballer (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 221 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Launchballer 10:54, 19 April 2024 (UTC).
Article was 5x expanded on the same day as nomination. Article is adequately sourced with inline citations, though provided source in ALT1 and the article only mentions popliteal pterygium syndrome as being a rare condition, rather than one suffered by 200 people in the UK. Could this be sourced? main Hook is fine. Earwig mostly returned lengthy titles that cannot be controlled, but I recommend making the following changes in the article so that they aren't so similarly worded:
- "He suffered from popliteal pterygium syndrome" → "Pelham was born with popliteal pterygium syndrome" ("popliteal pterygium syndrome" can be wikilinked)
- "he was nominated for best newcomer in the Chortle Awards" → "he was a Chortle Awards nominee for Best Newcomer" ("Chortle Awards" can also be wikilinked)
- Otherwise, QPQ complete. No other issues found. Please ping once issues are complete! Thanks, B3251 (talk) 23:34, 4 May 2024 (UTC)
- Oops, confused one List.co.uk piece with another. Resolved the two issues of close paraphrasing. Popliteal pterygium syndrome is linked in the lead, and Chortle Awards is linked via "Chortle Student Comedian of the Year" - I don't think extra links are necessary.--Launchballer 08:55, 5 May 2024 (UTC)