Template:Did you know nominations/Joe Gray (American football)

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by PrimalMustelid talk 23:56, 24 April 2024 (UTC)

Joe Gray (American football)

Created by BeanieFan11 (talk).

Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 161 past nominations.

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BeanieFan11 (talk) 17:05, 12 April 2024 (UTC).

  • Article passes creation and length requirements, both hooks work and contain a source. The article itself is adequately sourced, I would suggest changing "Portland, Oregon" to just "Portland" in the sentence "He moved to Portland, Oregon, when he was young." due to the state already being specified in the previous sentence, but the sentence itself may be an issue with its similarity to the source, not sure though. QPQs need to be finished, feel free to let me know once they are. Thanks! B3251 (talk) 20:58, 13 April 2024 (UTC)
    • @B3251: QPQs done. Reworded that one sentence. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:14, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
      • All good to go now. B3251 (talk) 02:34, 23 April 2024 (UTC)