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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by 4meter4 (talk) 20:51, 20 January 2016 (UTC)

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Created by Polentarion (talk). Self-nominated at 13:35, 23 December 2015 (UTC).

  • Length, date and sources verified. Articles is neutral. The only thing I would like to suggest is, maybe, a more exciting hook. What about:
  • ALT3: ... that in the viral ad video Heimkommen, a German grandfather fakes his own death to reunite his family? Just a suggestion. Calistemon (talk) 03:23, 27 December 2015 (UTC)
Thnx! Hooks added based on your line. Polentarion Talk 12:01, 6 January 2016 (UTC)
  • Pulled from prep for sourcing and verification issues. #1: The approved hook does not have an inline cite. #2: Per Rule H2, Calistemon cannot approve his own hook. Yoninah (talk) 14:31, 14 January 2016 (UTC)
Hook1 is based on the quote of the grandfather himself at the end of the video. Films can be used as a source in such contexts. I used a suggestion of Calistemon but paraphrased it in my own words in hook 2. OK? Polentarion Talk 15:26, 14 January 2016 (UTC)
I think sourcing the video should be fine (and likely accepted AGF), but it will still require inline citations. Jolly Ω Janner 17:22, 14 January 2016 (UTC)
I have expanded the intro and added two inline citation confirming hook #2. Calistemon (talk) 21:50, 14 January 2016 (UTC)
  • Thank you, @Calistemon:. ALT3 hook refs AGF and verified, and cited inline. Full review: New enough, long enough, well referenced, neutrally written, no close paraphrasing seen. Hook refs AGF and verified, and cited inline. QPQ done. ALT3 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 13:37, 20 January 2016 (UTC)
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