Template:Did you know nominations/Harvey H. DeArmond

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 21:44, 20 June 2019 (UTC)

Harvey H. DeArmond[edit]

Source: Bend Bulletin article about DeArmond dated 15 October 1956 (p. 1) says: "Harvey DeArmond, longtime Bend attorney, ... was the first district attorney of Deschutes County, appointed by Governor James Withycombe in 1916."

Created by Orygun (talk). Self-nominated at 02:21, 19 May 2019 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited: Yes - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
  • Interesting: Yes
QPQ: Done.

Overall: AGF for hook citation, requires a subscription DannyS712 (talk) 20:49, 19 May 2019 (UTC)

  • Hi, I came by to promote this, but I find the hook more name-dropping than hooky. Do we need to name the governor? Yoninah (talk) 21:43, 12 June 2019 (UTC)
@Orygun and Yoninah: what about
Alt 1: ... that when the state of Oregon created Deschutes County in 1916, Harvey H. DeArmond was appointed as the county’s first district attorney?
? --DannyS712 (talk) 21:47, 12 June 2019 (UTC)
  • Better, thanks. But this sentence in the article (in the main body) needs an inline cite per DYK rules. Yoninah (talk) 21:53, 12 June 2019 (UTC)
  • Orygun the hook sentence for ALT1 is not sourced in the article --valereee (talk) 20:34, 20 June 2019 (UTC)
  • In-line source has been added. ALT1 is fine with me.--Orygun (talk) 20:42, 20 June 2019 (UTC)
  • Thank you. Restoring tick per DannyS712's review. Yoninah (talk) 21:42, 20 June 2019 (UTC)