Template:Did you know nominations/475 °C embrittlement

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The result was: promoted by Lightburst (talk) 19:08, 23 May 2023 (UTC)

475 °C embrittlement

Improved to Good Article status by FuzzyMagma (talk). Nominated by Onegreatjoke (talk) at 20:38, 20 April 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/475 °C embrittlement; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Article improved to good article, passes earwig and is adequately sourced in the section mentioned. No close paraphrasing was found, and the hook is interesting, cited inline, and verified. QPQ done. Nom good to go. Pseud 14 (talk) 01:23, 28 April 2023 (UTC)

Hello, the hook is not cited in the article. Lightburst (talk) 00:50, 2 May 2023 (UTC)
@Lightburst: becuase it is in lead, but the details is in the section Age hardening by spinodal decomposition. Yes, the verbatim version is not cited but that what totality of that section means, i.e., precipitation hardening FuzzyMagma (talk) 16:59, 23 May 2023 (UTC)
@FuzzyMagma: I am not sure it complys with the requirement WP:DYK#3. Maybe you can put the actual hook in the body of the article and cite it. Lightburst (talk) 18:53, 23 May 2023 (UTC)
@Lightburst: done FuzzyMagma (talk) 19:00, 23 May 2023 (UTC)
@FuzzyMagma: I imagine it is ready. Thank you. Lightburst (talk) 19:05, 23 May 2023 (UTC)