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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 22:04, 18 May 2024 (UTC)

Gyōji

Sumo referee Kimura Shōtarō with a Pokémon-inspired kimono in January 2022
Sumo referee Kimura Shōtarō with a Pokémon-inspired kimono in January 2022
Improved to Good Article status by OtharLuin (talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.

OtharLuin (talk) 07:09, 26 April 2024 (UTC).

  • My first thought reading the hook was "my sphincter, the games were released in 1996!". The hook should make it clear that the games were in fact released then - simply adding "the 1996 games" will take the hook above WP:DYK200, so something else will have to give.--Launchballer 07:15, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
I don't think the mention of the year of release is so important that it needs to be added, the hook is centered on the kimono and I'm already specifying that it's the game's 25th anniversary. The hook is long enough as it is. - OtharLuin (talk) 07:24, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
Yes, which means as written the hook implies they were released in 1997! That said, I am a huge Pokémaniac (even to the point I spent much of the pandemic writing Pokémon-themed fanfiction, which at some point I should rewrite from scratch) and perhaps I'm being too overprotective. An actual reviewer can adjudicate on this.--Launchballer 07:57, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
  • Was this a limited-time promotion or now ongoing/continual? "Since the January 2022 sumo tournament, gyoji can be seen" makes it sound like the latter, while the sources give the impression that they were only talking about the one tournament. If it was just for a limited time then we should rephrase and use past tense. Adumbrativus (talk) 19:26, 27 April 2024 (UTC)
No limit in time. The Japan Sumo Association made a set of kimono to celebrate the anniversary but gyoji can still be seen wearing the said pokémon-inspired kimono in the ring today. (another source) - OtharLuin (talk) 22:03, 27 April 2024 (UTC)
This nomination still needs a reviewer. Z1720 (talk) 15:45, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
@OtharLuin, Launchballer, Z1720, and Adumbrativus:I've proposed an alternative:
  • Alt2 ... that since 2022, gyōji can be seen in the ring wearing Pokémon-inspired kimonos to celebrate the 25th anniversary of Pokémon Red and Blue? --evrik (talk) 01:12, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
  • Nominated in time. GA status. No QPQ needed. Original hook is okay. I'll leave the decision for the promoter. --evrik (talk) 01:20, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
Ok with me at the exception of the link for honbasho, it's misleading because a sumo ring is a dohyo. So I propose
Just to say that I don't plan on promoting any hook with the numbers '2022' and '25th' that doesn't also contain the correct year of release.--Launchballer 10:31, 18 May 2024 (UTC)