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Closing and collapsing an abandoned Good Article review. Safiel (talk) 19:20, 19 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
by Bruno Mars, Philip Lawrence and Ari Levine, Jeff Bhasker, and Emile Haynie -> by The Smeezingtons and Emile Haynie
and reminiscent of the song "It Will Rain" and Lana Del Rey's work -> It is reminiscent of his previous song, "It Will Rain" and was noted by critics for its similarities to Lana Del Rey's works.
Its music is largely -> Its instrumentation is mainly
to Contemporary hit radio -> to contemporary hit radio
complex instrumental -> complex instrumentation
record -> recording; record is generally used for album releases
Its lyrics, detail the fact of the singer being unable to resist to his attraction to young girls were met with criticism; with reviewers calling it a "recognizing sin" and "impassioned shame" -> Its lyrics, portraying the singer's attraction to young girls, were met with criticism...
in some -> in few
the released -> the release
Korea where it succeed by peaking a the top position -> Korea, where it reached number one
as the second single -> as the second single release for Unorthodox Jukebox
at 62 and 23 -> at number 63 and number 23
the position of 19 -> the top twenty
and 32 -> and number 32
certified gold -> certified Gold
the US -> that territory
The track was performed live sometimes -> The track was performed several times live, including
The song was only performed three times live, that doesn't account for several...maybe other word? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:24, 18 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
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