Talk:You're No Good (Jesse Fuller song)

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DateProcessResult
December 8, 2022Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on August 13, 2022.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Jesse Fuller's first release of his song "You're No Good" was more than a year after Bob Dylan had included it on his debut album?

Did you know nomination[edit]

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 07:25, 4 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Created by BennyOnTheLoose (talk). Self-nominated at 17:20, 22 July 2022 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited: Yes - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
  • Interesting: Yes
QPQ: Done.
Overall: I prefer ALT0 Z1720 (talk) 17:58, 22 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:45, 7 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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This can be completed by me within a day! --K. Peake 08:45, 7 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Lead[edit]

  • No infobox here is acceptable since it could be disputed which one would belong at the top
  • "that appeared as the first track" → "that first appeared as the opening track"
  • Mention the release year of Dylan's eponymous album
  • Add a sentence after the first one about how Dylan recorded eight takes
  • "Dylans version is more" → "Dylan's version is more"
  • Change the although part to simply mentioning that some critics praised its opening track, to avoid too much detail for the lead

Jesse Fuller version[edit]

  • Infobox looks good!
  • Mention the release year of "San Francisco Bay Blues"
  • "written and performed by Fuller was" → "written and performed by Fuller, was"
  • "washboard and fotdella" → "washboard, and fotdella"
  • "on the album's back cover." → "on its back cover."
  • "The notes claim that" → "The notes claim,"

Bob Dylan version[edit]

Background and recording[edit]

  • Pipe John H. Hammond to John Hammond (record producer)
  • ""'cause we were..." should not use double speech marks twice at the start
  • "but this was abandoned after interruptions, and later abandoned" double usage of abandoned reads confusingly; reword this
  • Remove wikilink on liner notes
  • Remove excess space after "She's No Good"
  • Either remove, replace or add appropriate text to the img per MOS:IMAGERELEVANCE
  • "one of several songs" → "was one of several songs"
  • "me' [in "You're No Good"]"." → "me' [in 'You're No Good']"."
  • "Harvey thinks that" → "Harvey thought that" to be consistent

Reception[edit]

  • Either relate the Michael Gray review to the song or remove it
  • "seem likely to have"" → "seem likely to have"."
  • Uncut should be italicised
  • "Robert Shelton wrote about the song" → "Shelton wrote about the song"
  • Why does the Shelton quote have a speech mark at the end when one is not used to start it?
  • "said in a 2022 interview that he had" → "said in a 2022 interview he had"

Notes[edit]

  • Good

References[edit]

Final comments and verdict[edit]

  •  On hold until all of the issues are fixed; this had been in the queue for so long that this review was long overdue! --K. Peake 09:46, 7 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Many thanks, K. Peake. Hopefully I've addressed everything, but let me know if more is required. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 15:04, 7 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • ✓ Pass now, I briefly copyedited but thanks for the quick response! --K. Peake 10:29, 8 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]
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