Talk:Typhoon Higos (2002)

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Good articleTyphoon Higos (2002) has been listed as one of the Natural sciences good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic starTyphoon Higos (2002) is part of the 2002 Pacific typhoon season series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
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October 7, 2012Good article nomineeListed
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Current status: Good article

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 20:30, 7 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

 Doing.... YE Pacific Hurricane 20:30, 7 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Typhoon Higos (international designation: 0221,[1] JTWC designation: 25W[2]) was estimated to have been the third strongest typhoon to affect Tokyo since World War II. " "estimated" seems odd here IMO. I suggest you drop it. YE Pacific Hurricane 20:40, 7 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    • Changed to "considered", since I don't think every typhoon's exact intensity was known, going back to WWII. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 21:07, 7 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Higos passed very near Tokyo around 1200 UTC that day,[4] and the JTWC estimated it was the third strongest typhoon to affect the city since World War II.[2] " I suggest re-wording it to ""Higos passed very near Tokyo around 1200 UTC that day,[4] becoming the third strongest typhoon to affect the city since World War II.[2] ". YE Pacific Hurricane 20:40, 7 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • ". By that time, the storm was beginning to transition into an extratropical cyclone, and at 0600 UTC on October 2 Higos completed the transition.[1] At that time, the JTWC discontinued advisories.[2] " It looks weird as "that time", suggest re-wording the "at that time" to "Subsequently" or "Simultaneously". YE Pacific Hurricane 20:40, 7 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Any aftermath? YE Pacific Hurricane 20:40, 7 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    • Nah, I got a ton of news sources, and it didn't cover any impact. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 21:07, 7 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Anything from relief web? YE Pacific Hurricane 20:40, 7 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Nice job Hurricanehink!