Talk:Torpedo...Los!/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 04:11, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

• Lead is a bit lacking. Can it be expanded a bit?
  • How is it now?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 07:12, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
• When it last sold in 1989 --> When it was last sold in 1989
  • Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 07:12, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
• Details --> Description
  • Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 07:00, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
• Critical commentary --> Reception
  • Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 07:00, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
• I see no other issues with the article. It is well written and sourced.

• All issues have been addressed; passing the article! Statυs (talk) 07:16, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

comment

Copyvio in the long quotes in footnotes should be addressed. Author should use original wording rather that quote everything. MathewTownsend (talk) 21:40, 26 July 2012 (UTC)