Talk:The Ring (South Park)/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

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Another great article! Here's my comments and questions:

  • Could you include the airdate in the lead?
  • Unlink the date in the infobox, and Trey Parker should only be linked once.
  • The second paragraph of the production section should be removed because it is unreferenced and unnecessary trivia.
  • Why does the Theme section have an {{issues}} template?
    • I think those issues have since been removed. I've dropped the tag; although of course if you see any issues please let me know! lol — Hunter Kahn (contribs) 22:12, 23 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • The last sentence of the first paragraph in the Cultural references section needs a reference.
    • Someone else added that when I wasn't looking. hehe. Dropped. — Hunter Kahn (contribs) 22:12, 23 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • Spell out "13th" in the Reception section, and unlink "Kenny".

I will put the article on hold for now and do another review once you've fixed this. Good luck! :) TheLeftorium 22:45, 21 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

  • Everything looks good. I will pass the article now. :) TheLeftorium 17:52, 24 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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