Talk:Shahjehan Aapa

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Peer Review[edit]

My Peer Review:

I need to begin by saying that this is excellent work. Your sections are separated perfectly and there is a ton of content that is all relevant to Aapa's life. The sources are mostly scholarly and most of yours claims are backed up by them. I also love how you linked certain words such as names and events to other Wikipedia articles. I did notice that you used some passionate language in your writing. I would say to limit this in order to preserve neutrality. An example of such a word is "heinous." I think that it would be appropriate to quote a word like this from a direct source because then you are using such a word with another person's mouth, not your own. Apart from this, I am very much impressed. Drabkin247 (talk) 06:06, 19 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you! This has been resolved, including the use of the word of the heinous as you mentioned. SkittlesGirl21 (talk) 02:12, 1 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Wiki Education assignment: Global Feminisms, 1850 to Present[edit]

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 28 September 2023 and 8 December 2023. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Maisygreen, SkittlesGirl21, Bluemoon41, Hanwein (article contribs). Peer reviewers: Drabkin247, LiveisGood567, Sk8trgrl.

— Assignment last updated by Sarahkoussa (talk) 19:20, 6 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]