Talk:Prelude to a Million Years

Prelude to a Million Years has been listed as one of the Language and literature good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: May 26, 2014. (Reviewed version).

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Reviewer: Seattle (talk · contribs) 13:16, 24 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

No DAB links, no dead links

The "Background" section goes unrepresented in the lead, add a sentence describing Ward's background
- How does it look now?
  - Looks fine now, every section represented. Seattle (talk) 13:36, 26 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Link "Depression of the 1930s" to Great Depression in the text
- Done. Curly Turkey ⚞¡gobble!⚟ 00:33, 25 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Link "jingoism"
- Done. Curly Turkey ⚞¡gobble!⚟ 00:33, 25 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

The most prominent symbol is a flower, representing the artist's distracted quest for beauty. All the while the protagonist remains indifferent to the turmoil around him. combine these sentences.
- Done: "The most prominent symbol is a flower, representing the artist's distracted quest for beauty while he remains indifferent to the turmoil around him." Curly Turkey ⚞¡gobble!⚟ 02:18, 26 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

French folds Can you link "folds" anywhere? What are "folds"?
- I looked, but couldn't find anything. It's a particular way books were (are?) made in France—the pages were folded in such a way that they had to be cut before reading. Curly Turkey ⚞¡gobble!⚟ 00:33, 25 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  - Actually, I found a brief mention in Book folding. Now linked. Curly Turkey ⚞¡gobble!⚟ 02:21, 26 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Image checks out. I'm content with the article in terms of the criteria after these notes are reviewed. Seattle (talk) 13:16, 24 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]