Talk:Phoenix Vernal Pools
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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment[edit]
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 23 January 2019 and 8 May 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Darianrose.
Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 02:19, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
Peer Review by Christina Burrows[edit]
- Great use of pictures in your draft, it adds a lot aesthetically to the article
- Change "mitigation cite" to mitigation site, just a spelling error
- Be sure to italicize "Orcuttia viscida" since it is a species scientific name
- I would consider putting the location/climate of the pools at the very beginning of the article, I have browsed a lot of other wikipedia articles and they generally start with describing the location, I think its generally a good way to introduce the topic
- I think we went to these pools as a field trip for Ecology and I remember the teacher talking about the importance of the area, specifically in the water, to certain species. Maybe discuss some of the species who depend on the pools and their status?
- You did a good job of providing informative, neutral, content
- I liked how you described the type of soil found at the site and why that leads to the formation of vernal pools
- Good job overall!