Talk:Phan Thiết

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This article on Phan Thiet is mostly an English translation of the Vietnamese version on Wikipedia. The original translator did a very poor job so I tried to edit the English version as much as I could, using the original Vietnamese version as a guide.

I commend the original translator for his/her effort but people without much knowledge in English should not attempt to translate another language into English without asking someone with better English skills to help him/her. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tom3605 (talk • contribs) 22:21, 14 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Changes to Article structure[edit]

Due to the issue of the Wiki Article being written in a similar fashion to a travel guide, I have made numerous edits to the structure of the article, such as the style of writing. For example, prior to the changes, the article was written in a colloquial manner, with examples such as "a great place for tourists to see". Such examples were altered to better suit Wikipedia's writing style of impartiality.