Talk:Pat Proctor

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This page needs more detail, especially where the military career of Proctor is concerned. Additional references and citations are needed, most if not all of the references here are from a self-published source, Pat Proctor's own web page, and some are 404. His early life should be discussed also. His birth year, place etc... Married life, etc...

I have revised only one sentence now, -- "He is looking for a publisher for his second book, Ideas to Die For: Lessons from the American Revolution for the War on Terrorism". It has a new title, but the source is still self-published.

Actually seems that the page could be set-up as an author's page. His published work as an author of military strategy and history may make him notable. I am now going to see if I can find reliable sources for this article and determine if the subject is notable.

Evananda (talk) 13:59, 21 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

The section on Wargames development in particular needs to be adjusted to refer to Proctor's particular impact on those systems. The place to describe how those systems work belong in the ProSim page, not Proctor's

Calamellus (talk) 23:47, 3 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]