Talk:Owl's eye appearance

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Hello, I have expanded the article. WikiProject quality scale class may need to be reassessed in future -LordAwalon (talk) 13:35, 28 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Revision of Lead[edit]

As part of the March 2024 GOCE Backlog Elimination Drive, I made rewrites to the lead in an attempt to make it more readable for novices. In the first (prose) section, some material may seem 'redundant' for those-more-familiar with subject. I left the second part/bullet list more technical (& 'opaque' for novice); but I did purposefully add wiki links to key terms for the novice. Hope this helps.

I may/may not attempt changes to article itself; the long list is hard to unpack, and also opaque for a non-specialist. But if anyone has a thought, please post. — Yogabear2020 (talk) 15:59, 8 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]