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Reviewer: The C of E (talk · contribs) 10:26, 18 January 2023 (UTC)
I will review this. For such a big article. This may take a few days and several rounds of comments. So please bear with me. The C of E God Save the King! (talk) 10:26, 18 January 2023 (UTC)
- The Global Enterprises sentence in the lead is a run-on sentence and should be broken up.
- "Arguably the most successful professional sports team in the United States and one of the most highly regarded," - WP:WEASEL
- How could Johnson declare major league status if the NL had already said no?
- What relevance does Joseph Gordon have to the Gordon Highlanders (apart from the same name), was his father in it or something?
- Why did the newspapers call them the "Invaders"?
- I cannot find a definite answer to the nickname origin. It might refer to the American Civil War according to The New York Times however no connection explicitly stated. -- LuK3 (Talk) 13:47, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
- Is there a source for the sentence stating the Highlanders name falling out of use?
- The article mentions Hilltop Park's lease expired but theres no mention of there being one earlier. Was it built and then leased to the Highlanders or did they own it?, sell it and lease it back and from whom?
- I added that they leased the land from the New York Institute for Special Education for 10 years (see [5]). -- LuK3 (Talk) 11:38, 20 January 2023 (UTC)
- Why were the Yankees kicked out of the Polo Grounds?
- Why were they called Murderers' Row?
- What other teams voted against the establishment of the amateur draft?
- In the 1981 section, Shea Stadium is WP:OLINKed as its already linked earlier when it talks about the Mets moving from the Polo Grounds.
- "the Yankees were 14+1⁄2 games behind the Red Sox" - linking the Yankees and Red Sox like that is a little confusing
- I agree, I reworded the sentence (see [10]). -- LuK3 (Talk) 12:02, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
- More to come. The C of E God Save the King! (talk) 08:52, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
- I know you're linking to teams seasons, rather than the actual team, but it does get a little misleading when the links on team names go to the season page. It should be made clearer.
- Aaron Boone has been double linked in Baby Bombers when he was already linked earlier
- DJ LeMaiheu needs linking at first mention
- Murderers Row has also been double linked in the nickname section
- Logos and uniform section is just a hatnote
- Polo Grounds double-linked in Fans and why the sudden inclusion of V at the end?
- I removed the link (see [15]). The reason for the "V" was because the Polo Grounds were actually different stadiums. -- LuK3 (Talk) 02:15, 24 January 2023 (UTC)
- It would help to clarify that Barcelona, Real Madrid and Man Utd are association football clubs. Likewise that the Cowboys are an American football club
- Old Yankee Stadium and Monument Park are double linked again in the Retired Numbers
- Rivalries section, more double links on the teams mentioned earlier
- Subway Series, has it been mentioned why the games are called that, is there a direct subway link between the teams?
- Added the term origin with a reference (see [20]). -- LuK3 (Talk) 00:37, 25 January 2023 (UTC)
- More to come on the refs later. The C of E God Save the King! (talk) 08:45, 20 January 2023 (UTC)
- WP:OLINK on repeated references to MLB Advanced media, NY Times etc.
- Source 36, no page number
- Source 41, no page number
- Society of American Baseball Research sources, OLINK
- Source 151, no page number
- Source 158 and 224, CBS shouldn't be italicised as it isn't a print source
- Sources 191 and 192, MLB the same as above
- Source 205, no page number
- Sources 214 and 218, MLB italicised again
- Source 227, error in linking the Vindicator
- Source 237, MLB italicised
- Source 240, no page number
- Source 245, no link to online source
- Source 253, several souces in one footnote
- Source 254, CBS italicised (It seems to be the same for all of CBS and MLB references so I'll mention all those in here to save repetition)
- Source 285, same issue as 253
- ESPN (non magazine), also seems to have italicisation issues
- Source 414, no date
- Source 440, no accessdate
- Source 454, no page number
- Source 466, that source mentions the Bleacher Creatures doing homophobic chants, but that isn't included in the article when it should be mentioned they made a little more than a hostile environment towards opposition players.
- Source 485, isbn number isn't consistent with the rest of the article and no page number
- Source 492, no page number
- Source 607, 608, 612, 618 and 619 they're looking like footnotes rather than references there.
- @LuK3:, that concludes my review. A little exhaustive I know! Please ping me when you've had a chance to have a look at the points i've raised and I'll go over it again. I won't mark it as on hold and start the 7 day timer just because I know this could take a little while with such a big article. The C of E God Save the King! (talk) 11:19, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
- Thanks The C of E for the thorough review. I believe I addressed all of your points. Feel free to ping me back if I did miss anything. -- LuK3 (Talk) 02:15, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
- Looks like it now meets the criteria to me. Well done @Luk3:. This is now a GA, sorry you had to wait so long for it. The C of E God Save the King! (talk) 07:56, 28 January 2023 (UTC)
- Thanks The C of E for the thorough review. I believe I addressed all of your points. Feel free to ping me back if I did miss anything. -- LuK3 (Talk) 02:15, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
- @LuK3:, that concludes my review. A little exhaustive I know! Please ping me when you've had a chance to have a look at the points i've raised and I'll go over it again. I won't mark it as on hold and start the 7 day timer just because I know this could take a little while with such a big article. The C of E God Save the King! (talk) 11:19, 21 January 2023 (UTC)